写作专题十：现代技术通讯
一． 与专题相关的话题项目
通讯 (Communication)、科普知识与现代技术（Popular science and moderntechnology）
二．与专题相关的知识准备
1. 相关单元：7BU6Electricity, 8AU1Encyclopaedias, 8AU2 Numbers, 8AU3 Computers,
8AU4 Inventions, 8AU7 Memory, 8BU7 The unknown world
2. 相关词汇：
高频词：rule,anyone, reply, foolish, connect, moment, cooker, fridge, lock,test, tidy, touch, human, dinosaur, inventor, musician, scientist,born, countryside, intelligence, ability, perhaps, invention,notebook, include, even, however, suddenly, nobody, win, dollar,number, check, son, chess, wise, promise, prize, amount, rest,gold, instead, realize, copy, traffic, accident, order, type,brain, control, expensive, tiny, depend, speed, railway, company,price, sell, popular, funny, telephone, comfortable, invent, since,lose, improve, mind, silly, letter, worth, spell,unless,trouble, manager, unknown, receive, hill, loud, quiet, round,wonder, refuse, knife, pleased
高频短语：ina way, switch off,tidy up, in the countryside, human being, die out, find out, go fora walk, a long time ago, and so on, copy down, work as, depend on,in addition, look forward to, since then, keep in touch with, inthe daytime, keep… off,at the same time, instead of, take out, keep quiet, because of, assoon as possible, agree with, disagree with
拓展词汇：electricity,conversation, identify, wire, cable, battery, bulb, Italian,artistic, fossil, compare, operate, total, create,particle,mobile phone, special, memory, corner, mention, mile, step,similar, wallet, damage, frightened, terrible,explain, washing machine, a packet of, be connected to, powerstation, air conditioner, challenge …to…,be unaware of, grand total, pour out,
3. 经典句型：a. Itis + adj. + for sb. +to do/ It is+ adj. + that 从句
b. Sb. spend time on sth./ in doing sth./ It takes sb. + time+ todo.
c.One advantage is that …. Another advantage is that ….
d.On one hand, … On the other hand,
e.I think/believe that…
二、经典例题：
随着互联网的发展，越来越多的学生开始使用网络。最近，你的学校进行了一个关于中学生是否应该上网的调查，大都数同学赞成上网，少部分同学反对上网，请根据以下表格内容，把同学们的讨论结果整理出来，并就如何正确使用网络提出你自己的观点，写成一篇80字左右的短文。(注意：文章的开头已给出)
赞成（60%）
反对（40%）
1互联网非常有用，它改变了人们的生活
1 上网浪费了大量的时间和金钱
2彼此沟通更方便
2 网络游戏会毒害青少年
3可查找大量信息并随时与朋友交换信息
你的观点？
With thedevelopment of the Internet, it has become more and more commonamong the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, ourschool did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent ofthe students agree to use the Internet because…
解题思路：
1.审题：
a. 本文共有 6个要点
b. 时态主要采用 一般现在时
c. 人称是_we/TheInternet_
2.可能用到的短语和句型 beuseful to, change people’slife, communicate with, search information, share information, awaste of time, be harmful to, in one’sopinion
a. It is + adj. + for sb. +to do/ It is+ adj. + that 从句
b. Sb.spend time on sth./ in doing sth./ It takes sb. + time+ todo.
c.One advantage is that ….Another advantage isthat ….
d. On onehand, … Onthe other hand,
3.成文：
Withthe development of the Internet, it has become more and more commonamong the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, ourschool did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent ofthe students agree to use the Internet because the Internet is veryuseful and it change people life.It’salso more confident forus to communicate with each other and we can share information withours friends. There isa lot of information on it, so when we don’tunderstand sth. Wemay find the explain on it. But 40 percent of the students against.They think play computergames is harmful for teenagers and waste alot of time and money. Although Internet has someproblems,I thinkit is good for us. If we use the Internetcorrect,we will learn a lot.
点评：
整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的结构不够完整，缺发主语或谓语，词类误用的现象比较明显，表达也过于中式，略显生硬。此外，
应适当使用连接词，是文章过渡更自然。
4. 分项分档评分表
项目
要素
给分表
内容
6分
切合题意，体现要点
6-5．5
6
5—4.5
4-3.5
3-2.5
2
1.5
1
0
有所发挥
准确性
6分
语 法
6-5.5
5—4.5
4-3.5
4
3-2.5
2
1.5
1
0
词 汇
机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误
流畅性
3分
结构
3-2.5
2-1.5
1
0.5
0.5
0
0
0
0
自评总分： 10.5
5. 检查思路：
完成作文自查表：
1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。
2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。
项目
第一次自查
第二次自查
布局与内容要点
人称 时态、主谓一致
动词搭配、介词搭配
拼写错误
好词好句
6.参考例文：
With the development of the Internet,it has become more and more common among the students. Shouldstudents use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey onit. According to thesurvey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internetbecause itis very useful and it has people’slife. One advantage isthat itis moreconvenient for people tocommunicate with each other. The other advantage isthat we can search a lot of information on the Internet and shareit with our friends in real time. The Internet helps make our life easier, but it can also bedangerous. 40 percent of the students think that it is a waste of time andmoney to surf the net. Some students spendtoo much time on the net playing games. It’sreally harmful to teenagers.
Inmy opinion,the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages,we should make good use of it, but at the same time,we should also learn to control ourselves when we useit.
三． 练习：
随着科技的发展，人们会选择不同的方式去和朋友沟通。过去，很多人会相互写信，后来，有了电话，而现在，人们会使用网络进行沟通，如QQ、博客或者微信，请根据下表的提示，比较一下这几种沟通方式的异同，80字左右，文章的开头已给出：
沟通方式
特点
写 信
速度很慢，但是可以练习写作
打电话
可以听到声音，但是太贵了
网 络
沟通又快又便宜，但是有时不太安全,比如容易泄露个人信息
With the development of the technology, people have more and moreways to communicate with each other. …
解题思路：
1. 审题：
d. 本文共有 个要点
e. 时态主要采用
f. 人称是_________
2. 可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 可能用到的句型
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4. 成文：
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
检查思路：
完成作文自查表：
1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。
2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。
项目
第一次自查
第二次自查
布局与内容要点
人称 时态、主谓一致
动词搭配、介词搭配
拼写错误
好词好句
参考例文：
Withthe development of the technology, people have more and more waysto communicate with each other. In the past, people had no otherways but writing letters. It often takes a long time to get aletter from a friend. But it is agood way to practise writing.For a long time, people prefer to make phone calls to their friendsbecause you can hear the voice. However, it will cost you a lot ofmoney. Nowadays, more and more people chooseto use the Internet to communicate, such as QQ and blog. They aremuch faster than writing letters and much cheaper than making phonecalls. But some people don’tlike using blog, because it is not always safe to use the Internet.Sometimes your personal information will be easily got by strangersand you may be in trouble.
