前言
Discussion与Result在论文中所占篇幅并不多,却有着升华主题,提升论文高度的作用。要最大限度发挥这两部分的作用,整合材料信息必不可缺。
【第六课】
“如何整合Discussion与Result部分中的信息”
Discussion
第一段:
指出本研究的重要性,所解决的问题,以及简明扼要指出对这些问题的回答或是结论。指出最新颖最原创最独特的研究结果和科学意义,用一般现在时的时态。用词举例如下:
Current US recommendations for…seem to vary markedly on the basis of differences in…
The results of our study suggest that…has become a criterion for… This finding may help to explain…
This study shows..
In this study, we have found
· Our results show that
· These results thus lend further credence to other (our earlier)
· In this study, we demonstrate
· The question addressed by the present study….. The main finding of our study is…
第二段:
讨论与以往研究之间的差异或一致的地方
Our findings also indicate that
A19XX survey of [target pop.] reported that [%] of respondents…Since that time,their has been a [eventa] which may influence [occurrence b]
Regardless of these results, (%) of the respondents in our survey said that they….
This contrasts sharply with…
The relationship between…and…may extend beyond temporal coincidence
Although it might be argued that there is…other sources indicate that…
It is possible that respondents in our study were inclined to (behavior 1) because of (plausible explanation)
In contrast…
This difference may beexplained by…
Respondents familiarity with…may also have been a factor
Althoughthe importance of …has been established…our finding that….is noteworthy given the lack of published trials assessing its efficacy]
In light of its popularity and the dearth of evidence to support its use, the role of…in the treatmentof…should be studied more thoroughly.
Several studies supportthe use of…in the assessment of….
Althoughthe above cited studies demonstrate…neither goes as far as to arguethat…
Although subjects who responded to the survey were expected to…several studies indicate that…ispoorlyunderstood by….
When we consider the outcome measures of…the significance of…becomes less clear
Further clouding this are…
Our findings suggest that…
第三段:
讨论次要结果或者是未预料到的结果,举例如下:
A surprising finding was that
讨论这些研究的重要性和显著性,举例如下:
This strategy may be useful
This finding may serve to explain/provide clarity for…
第四段:
阐述次要发现,并讨论其意义。
Although the results of the present study indicate…a casecontrol study would provide amore robust study design with more detailed quantitative information
Additional research in this area might include…
The lack of a control group in the present study highlights the need for...
Result
采用一段式结构。第一句话首先应该是对本研究的总体概要。
Pediatric emergency medicine physicians seem to favor use of…for despite conflicting results of clinical trials and meta-analyses
This finding may help to explain…
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