【写作任务】
面对生活中遇到的困难和压力,我们要勇敢地面对,学会解决。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:
1.多锻炼,有助于身体健康和更好地学习;
2.与父母、老师或朋友多交流,接受他们的建议;
3.听听音乐,看看书,学会放松自己。
【谋篇布局】
理清文章要素,构建文章结构。
【遣词造句】
就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。
1. 我们应该多锻炼。体育运动有助于使我们的身体更健康,也使我们更好地学习。
We should take more part in exercise. Sports can help make our body healthierandmake us study better.
2. 我们应该与父母、老师或朋友多交流,这样他们会给出我们更多有用的建议。
We should talk with our parents, teachers or friends as often as we can so that they can give us more useful advice.
3. 我们应该听听音乐,看看书。这是放松自己的好方式。
We should listen to music or read some books. They are good ways to relax ourselves.
4. 当我们有时取得不好的成绩时,我们应该学会勇敢地面对。
When we sometimes get bad grades, we should learn to face them bravely.
【巧妙衔接】
利用连词,使句子意思连贯。
本文在提出问题后,按照要点提示可以运用firstly, secondly, thirdly等来分别提出合理化的建议,这样使文章层次分明。
佳句妙用:
1. Why don’t you share your problems with your best friends?(为什么不和你最好的朋友分担你的问题呢?)
2. In my opinion, it’s important for kids to play sports after school.(依我看,放学后进行体育活动对孩子们来说很重要。)
【连句成篇】
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them? Here is some advice.____________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文:
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them? Here is some advice.
Firstly, we should take more part in exercise. I think sports can help make our body healthier and make us study better. In my opinion, it’s necessary for us to exercise more than one hour every day. Secondly, we should talk with our parents, teachers or friends as often as we can so that they can give us more advice to solve those problems and stress. Thirdly, we should listen to music or read some books in our free time. I think they’re good ways to relax ourselves. Fourthly, when we sometimes get bad grades, we should learn to face them bravely. If we are under too much stress, why not see a doctor?
All in all, if we accept the advice above, I think we can deal with our problems and stress successfully. We can become more and more confident.
【写作实践】
Hello everyone,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文:
Hello everyone,
I'm Li Hua. I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. I'm not tall and I'm not goodlooking. But I don't care about these. I always believe in myself. My parents sometimes can't understand what I do and say. I have few friends at school. So I often communicate with them and I'm always friendly to my classmates at school. I have too much pressure in study too and often have few afterschool activities. So I often relax myself. When I have free time, I often do sports or listen to music. Sometimes I go shopping with my parents or friends. In this way, I can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.
That's all. Thank you!
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