焦溪小学五（4）周奕峰日记[凤凰语文论坛]

2013年10月25日周6

                                       

                                        夜

     傍晚，我坐在窗台上望着天空。晚霞渐渐退去了，只剩下一抹红      颜，周围全是深蓝。我即兴写下了一首小诗：                                 

 

                                        夜                                                

                         是谁给天空披上深蓝的睡衣？                            

                        是谁让的城市睁开闪亮的眼眸？                          

                                                                                           

                                       是夜！                                           

                              是夜把太阳弟弟赶走，                                

                              是夜把月亮姐姐带来，                                

                          是夜让疲劳的人们安心睡觉。                           

                                                                                           

                                          啊！                                           

                                          夜，                                           

                         你是多么的神奇.多么美妙啊！                           

      这首小诗是我即兴写下的，请各位多多指教！谢谢！