翻译硕士英语的作文涉及到哪些类型呢,有什么要求呢,今天拿一篇2014年中山大学的作文真题来分析,后期对作文的命题规律会作讲解。大家一起来看范文:
Writing:
While some people claim that a person’s essential qualities are inherited at birth , others hold that the circumstances in which a person grows up are mainlyresponsible for the type of person he /she later becomes. What do you think of this? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:
Essential Qualities : Inherited or NOT?
In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you shouldsupport your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
写作要求分析:
写作类型:问题选择型
写作文体:议论文
写作字数:400词左右
评分要点:content, organization, grammar and appropriateness
写作内容:Essential Qualities : Inherited or NOT?
写作内容分析:
该作文是命题作文,而且要求按照议论文的三段论来写。考生需要展开思路,阐明自己的观点。
文章结构构建:
这是一篇问题选择型的议论文写作。对于这类文章,要首先分析两者的优劣势,同时给出自己的选择。之后就可以就此选择进行阐述。第一部分给出选择;第二部分给出选择原因,同时列举一到两个例子;第三部分总结观点。
参考范文:
Essential Qualities : Inherited or NOT?
An increasing number of experts are beginning to study the people’s personalities. Most people agree that man’s nature at birth is good, which has become the oldest evidence to support that our essential qualities are inherited from parents. However, not everyone becomes a winner. The rising level of crime has become such a sign in present-day society.In my opinion, what kind of person we become depends on our families, educations and social backgrounds, not the genes we inherited from our parents.(点题)
Firstly, what kind of family we born in determines how we grow up. Statistics indicated that the alternatives to traditional nuclear families, such as single parent families and step families, are less satisfactory for the mental health of the children. Even if a child has an optimistic father, the child may easily become pessimistic when the father left or die.
Secondly, what kind of education we receive determines what personalities we acquire. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that a person’s education is the most important aspect of one’s life. A positive studying environment offers us more opportunities to shape confident, diligent and optimistic characters. The latest survey among 50 sets of twins shows that even twins share the common genes with their sisters or brothers, they do not usually hold the same interests . They get different jobs which linked to their various educations.
Lastly, what kind of social backgrounds we live in determines what kind of person we can finally become. As an old saying goes, the times produce their heros. When we look back tothe American history, heroes jumping into our minds are often those who defy difficulties and dare to explore new ground.Taking the renowned American president Abraham Lincoln for example, he was born into a poor family, but he seized opportunities and accumulated rich experience in politics and finally became president. During his term, Lincoln conquered all obstacles and declared to abolish slavery considering such act is for the sake of the country.
From what is said above, our essential qualities are determined by the families, educations and our social backgrounds.(总结) Although some investigations point out the important role of genes, there is no denying the fact that the circumstances we grow up in aremore influencial to our qualities-formation. In view of these important impacts, we should learn how to seek goods and avoid disadvantages, it will not only helps strengthen our personalities, but also do benefit for our country and the society.
评分标准:
语言(language):语法错误,词汇难度,句法难度,固定搭配和固定句型,习语俗语的应用-----9分(总分为12分);
结构(structure):符合说明文的三段论或四段论格式——3分(总分为3分);
内容(content) :内容充实,且与题干要求贴切,表述未偏题—8分(总分为12分);
长度(length):总长403词,符合要求的400左右词数—3分(总分为3分)。
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