Describe a public place that you think need improvements.
You should say:
Where it is?
What it’s like?
Why you think it needs improvements?
And how to make it better.
The place I think needs improvements is a public toilet nearby my school.
I don't dare to use it or go anywhere around it because i can't bear the stink.
It’s a filthy place with a disgusting smell around it.
I've been there once. Literally, I was shocked by what i saw there. Let me describe it to you. On the floor, shit's everywhere. Ads of sexworkers were all over the walls. What a picture. Anyway, it's hard to imagine there's a place like it in this beautiful city.
It needs improvement because people will need a clean toilet when the nature calls.I've talked about it with some classmates who have been there before. Actually, we are considering writing a letter to the mayor's office to complain about it.
I've thought about what we could do about it.
First, the cleaning lady should be fired since she can't do her job well. The job should be given to someone that takes it seriously.
Second, the toilet needs a renovation. Those ads should be cleaned off and walls (should be) repainted.
There's a lot of work to do.
朱国伟
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