这是2023高考新课标I、II卷佳句仿写练习与语料的第二部分。A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I had won the writing contest! I was in disbelief. The girl who once writing dreaded, who struggled with English, had won a writing contest. My classmates were surprised, but they congratulated me. My family was overjoyed, their faces beaming with pride. I felt a sense of accomplishment, not because I had won, but because I had overcome my fear and reluctance. I had discovered a new passion, a new way to express myself.
I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. He was sitting at his desk, a proud smile on his face. 'I knew you could do it,' he said, his eyes twinkling. I thanked him for his encouragement and support. He had seen potential in me that I hadn't seen in myself. From that day forward, I approached writing with a newfound enthusiasm and confidence. I realized that it wasn't about being perfect, but about telling a story, my story. And that was something I could do, even in my second language.
佳句1:I felt a sense of accomplishment, not because I had won, but because I had overcome my fear and reluctance. 1 我有一种胜利的感觉,不是因为我成为了班级第一,而是因为我战胜了自我怀疑和拖延。 I felt a sense of victory, not because I had topped the class, but because I had conquered my self-doubt and procrastination.2 我有一种胜利的感觉,不是因为我完成了比赛,而是因为我突破了身体的限制和疲劳。I felt a sense of triumph, not because I had finished the race, but because I had pushed past my physical limitations and fatigue.佳句2:He was sitting at his desk, a proud smile on his face.She was standing on the stage, a confident glow in her eyes.He was resting on the bench, a satisfied expression on his face.佳句3:I realized that it wasn't about being perfect, but about telling a story, my story.1 我明白,这并不是关于赢得每一场比赛,而是关于以我自己的方式充满激情地玩耍。I understood that it wasn't about winning every game, but about playing passionately, my way. 2 我承认,这并不是关于取悦每一个人,而是关于表达我的观点,我的观点。I acknowledged that it wasn't about pleasing everyone, but about expressing my opinions, my perspectives.A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I had won first place! Shocked and elated, I hardly believed it. My classmates cheered, my teacher gave me a proud smile, and I felt a sense of achievement and pride swelling within me. The story from the horse's mouth, which I had toiled over, doubting every sentence, had been appreciated and recognized. The certificate was nice, but the real prize was the realization that I could write, and that I enjoyed it.
I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. My heart filled with gratitude, I told him, 'Thank you for pushing me to write. You believed in me when I didn't.' He simply grinned and replied, 'You've always had the talent. You just needed to trust yourself.' That day, I walked out of the school with more than just a certificate; I had gained confidence and a newfound love for writing.
佳句1:Shocked and elated, I hardly believed it.1惊讶和激动,我几乎无法接受。Amazed and thrilled, I could hardly accept it.2震惊且激动的,我几乎无法接受。Astonished and thrilled, I could hardly grasp it.佳句2:My classmates cheered, my teacher gave me a proud smile, and I felt a sense of achievement and pride swelling within me.1 我的团队鼓掌,我的教练向我竖起大拇指,我感到一种满足感和自尊心在我心中升起。My team applauded, my coach gave me a thumbs up, and I felt a wave of satisfaction and self-esteem rise within me.2 我的同事们向我表示祝贺,我的老板点头赞同,我感到一种成就感和尊严充满了我。My colleagues congratulated me, my boss nodded in approval, and I felt a surge of accomplishment and dignity filling me.佳句3:The story from the horse's mouth, which I had toiled over, doubting every sentence, had been appreciated and recognized.1 我亲手做的项目,我对每一个细节都付出了努力,质疑过,却得到了认可和赞扬。The project from my own hands, which I had labored over, questioning every detail, had been acknowledged and praised.2 我亲手画的画,我在每一笔每一划上都挣扎过,批评过,却得到了欣赏和庆祝。The painting from my own brush, which I had struggled with, critiquing every stroke, had been admired and celebrated.