一、ideal job
2019年5月大学英语四级考试第一场个人陈述为ideal job; 既自己心目中理想的工作。这个题目与我们生活密切相关,马上又迎来了一年一度的大学生毕业季,找工作成了很多毕业生时下最关心的话题,那么,理想的工作究竟是什么样子?我们如何组织语言来描述自己对未来工作的期待?文都四六级老师给大家支招:每个人自己的专业,爱好都不一样,所以究竟该选择怎样的工作没有固定的标准答案,但是可以进行一系列的扩充,将自己的表达细化。下面是文都四六级老师的范本,供各位考生参考。
When I was young, I wanted to work for a public hospital as a doctor. In fact, becoming a doctor, who wears white uniforms, was my dream in my childhood.
I have heard about this job from my teachers and relatives in my childhood and then I had a superficial idea about this job. When I was 15 or 16 years old, I saw a documentary about doctors in Discovery channel that gave me a clear idea of the job.
Working as a doctor requires a series of training and to become a good doctor one needs comprehensive knowledge and skills. Usually, the job position requires a doctoral degree and a series of certificates on relevant major. The students who are majoring in medicine usually have comprehensive curricula, both theoretical and practical, on how to deal with medical treatment. The theoretical parts teach them different body systems, and process guidelines where the practical parts allow them to actually do a surgery. Anyway, it’s not easy to be a doctor. One have to on the one hand study very hard on the theoretical knowledge, and on the other hand be sufficient in practical.
I was fascinated on working as a doctor, because I think saving others life is sacred. It was a thrilling job to me when I was a young. Since my family members started giving me the idea of future careers about what I would become in the future, I started speculating my own idea and chose this major. I knew studying at medicine school is not easy. Working as a doctor is also very busy. Many doctors work overtime because there are not enough doctors in many pubic hospitals in our countries. Sometimes, even doctors try their best, they still can’t save all patients life. From my point of view, in order to become a good doctor, I have to pursuit a master degree and then a doctoral degree. Even though I am very busy, I am not regret about my choice at all. For all those reasons it was my dream job when I was young.
上述论述分4段讲述了我理想的工作,以医生这个职业为案例,讲述了为什么是我理想的专业,我对该专业的了解,以及我后来的选择。理想的工作每个人都不一样,但是基于对工作的了解,我们可以借鉴这篇范文的思路,进行一定的扩展。
二、A Memorable Day
Well, when talking about the memorable day, my first thought was a birthday party held last December.
It was a sunny and cozy day. I was invited to a birthday party held by my American friend Andy in a beautiful part in Beijing.
It was totally different from our Chinese gatherings since it was in traditional western style. At the party, all of us wore great costumes and enjoyed various kinds of western food, which impressed me most was the tasty turkey cooked by Andy’s wife. We danced together with the music and wished Andy all the best in his life. We shared different stories happened in China and other countries when eating the birthday cake. It was awesome.
I’d like to say that was the most impressive party I’ve taken part in. Besides the delicate food, I also made new friends from different countries and learned a variety of cultural traditions from them. It was like a new world opened to me. In addition, I think this was an excellent opportunity for me to know other foreign languages besides English. If I can get other chances like this party, I really like to join again.
上述范文从一场生日聚会描述了自己难忘的经历。我们可以看出,这个话题可以归为记叙文性质,也就是讲故事,因此在描述自己难忘的一天时,可以从时间、地点、人物、事件以及感受方面来阐述,即when、where、who/ with whom、what happened、feelings,同时大家一定注意,这个话题的时态一般使用过去时。
三、Importance of Protecting Folk Art
本场个人陈述的主题为“保护民间艺术的重要性”,中国的民间艺术博大精深,是我们都应该去保护和珍惜的伟大财富,欣赏民间艺术不仅可以使我们身心愉悦,也能让我们更了解祖国的历史文化。那么接下来,我们来看一下就“保护民间艺术的重要性”这一主题展开的一些常用的表述:
Importance of Protecting Folk Art
The Chinese folk art is extensive and profound, and it has many types including lion dance, Beijing opera, paper-cut, clay sculpture, face, and shadow play. However, as the time goes on, we find that there are less people willing to undertake the careers related to those folk arts, and many even think them useless in the society with advanced technologies and highly developed economy. But in my opinion, it is still very important to protect the folk art in these days due to the following reasons. First, Chinese folk art is the embodiment of our great history and culture, so protecting the art means cherishing our history. As a nation with long history, China has the unique folk art in the world, which should be the pride of us. And our folk art should also go abroad and be known by the world. Second, the folk art can bring us joy mentally and physically. As modern people, many of us may lack body exercise and practice because of our long screen time. But if we go outside and enjoy the folk art, for instance, joining the folk art exhibition, we will experience another kind of happiness.
四、The Importance of Clean Environment
2019年5月25日,大学四级口语考试第四场个人陈述部分话题为干净的环境的重要性,即The Importance of Clean Environment。有关环境的话题总是层出不穷,但是归根结底其实考察的重点就是在于是否需要环境保护,环境保护的重要性,或者环境保护的有益影响。那么现在文都四六级老师就从以上几个方面为大家分析这个话题的陈述方法和技巧。以下是范文部分,仅供大家参考。
Let me see. Surely there’s no doubt that lean environment is crucial. Everyone needs to live in a clean environment and I am no exception.
The benefits are manifold. For instances, it is good for your health if we live in a clean environment, since we can breath fresh air and drink clean water. Clean environment provides us with opportunities to enjoy beautiful views of green mountains and clear rivers in which fishes swim freely.
It also allows us to have good mood every day when working or studying. Just imagine, if we drive on the road after a day’s tedious work, suddenly we run onto a road with litter everywhere and unpleasant smell from the river beside the road, what will we feel and what will we do? We are likely to feel grumpy and anxious.
It is hard to imagine how awful and terrible our life would be if we can’t live in a clean environment, so I’d like to suggest that we do all our best to protect our environment for our physical and psychological health. It is our responsibility to protect where we live and set examples to the next generations so as to maintain our clean environments forever.
第一段先表明干净的环境确实很重要。第二段阐述干净的环境对于身体健康的重要性,第三段阐述对心理健康的重要性。最后一段通过反证再次印证干净的环境的重要性,并倡导大家保护环境。
关于“重要性”的话题,首先要先表明自己的立场:某件事确实很重要,然后分别阐述自己的理由。这里请大家注意,因为大家会阐述多个理由,所以要有意识地使用表示顺序的连接词,如from the beginning,next,additionally,besides,last but not least,因为行文的连贯性是我们四六级口语考试的评分标准之一。
“重要性”的话题属于议论文性质,对于议论文话题我们可以从以下八个方面来考虑:情绪、健康、人际关系、职业、金钱、效率、能力/质量、安全性/稳定性。
另外对于“重要性”的话题,给大家提供几个常用的短语和表达。
Benefits are manifold/ multiple.
Sth. Allows sb. to do sth. / helps sb. to do sth.
Sth. provides sb. with chances to do sth.
Sth. offers a chance to do sth.
现在你明白有关“重要性”的话题该怎么表述了吗?
五、Music
2019年5月大学英语四级考试第五场个人陈述为music; 即音乐给我们生活带来的影响。提到音乐大家并不陌生,相信很多考生还有自己喜欢的音乐形式,喜欢的歌手。而这些,都可以成为我们口语描述的素材。大家可以结合自身的经历,来谈谈音乐给自己的生活带来的影响,文都四六级老师给大家支招:该话题比较灵活,可以融入自己的歌星,自己的演唱会经历,自己的特长,与生活衔接紧密,但最终都需要由个人归纳到整体的宏观影响层面来。下面是文都四六级老师的范本,供各位考生参考。
To be honest, I think music exert great influence on me personally. I love music, not any particular music genre though, my taste of music is actually quite mixed up. I think music expresses various kinds of human souls, which I like very much. For example,I am a rock buff and like all kinds of rock music, say, metal core, industrial metal, classic rock and melodic death metal. My favorite rock band is Oasis. They have been helping me get through my tough days ever since I first listened to their songs.
Music exert substantial influence on public, especially the young. There are many famous singers who specialize at pop music in China, attracting millions of fans at all ages. My favorite pop singer is Jay Chow, whose music career has long been a huge success ever since his first debut in Taiwan.
Besides, nowadays, many young people have learned to play, more or less, at least one music instrument. Take myself as an example, I once learned to play the harp when I was little. My mother taught me how to play the harp since she is a music teacher specializing at this musical instrument. But later, I had to give it up due to my heavy studying burden. I’d like to learn it again in the future if possible.
All in all, music influence people in numerous aspects of our life. Music can relief our pressure and adjust our emotions. Personally, I believe it is quite important to learn to play a musical instrument. Therefore, one can have a deeper understanding about music and its theory. With music, people can learn to appreciate the beauty of rhythm and express their emotion, enjoy their life.
上述论述分别从个人和整体,谈论了对音乐给人们生活影响的话题。每个人对音乐的理解,影响和了解程度都会有所不同。有的考生有自己喜欢的音乐形式,甚至会一到两门乐器。但绝大多数情况下,大部分人是喜欢音乐的。而音乐给人们生活带来的影响,往往也是积极,正面的。我们可以借鉴这篇范文的思路,进行一定的扩展。我们可以以自身为例,先谈谈音乐对自己的影响,再讨论音乐会给社会和年轻人带来的影响。
现在大家了解到此类话题的展开思路了吗?文都教育的老师祝愿大家在四六口语的考试中取得好成绩。
切记,在考场上一定要对话题进行详细的,有条理的阐述,千万不要三言两语就完事了。文都教育老师提醒大家:一定要在考试中展现大学生昂扬向上的精神风貌,这样您的分数不会低。
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