Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1. describe the drawing briefly,
2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
3. give your comments.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
审题及提纲
图画向我们展示了一个近年来生活中很常见的场景：一位老人摔倒在地，尽管周围有很多人，但大家都只是在一旁围观，没有人愿意上前提供帮助。值得注意的是，在这位摔倒的老人和围观的群众之间横亘着一道“围墙”。而这道“围墙”上什么标识也没有，这不禁引人深思，“到底是什么阻碍了人们向摔倒的老人伸出援助之手？”据此，考生可在描述图画内容之后分析人们不愿扶老人的原因，最后予以总结。
第一段：描述图画。需体现出老人的状态与群众的反应之间的对比，以增强图画所反映话题的冲击力。
第二段：揭示寓意，充分延展。点明主题后，可先解释清楚图画现象形成的原因。然后结合实例说明该现象的危害，为末段的总结作铺垫。
第三段：总结评论。重申观点，并呼吁人们保护社会信任和理性帮助老人。
经典模板范文
As is graphically pictured by the cartoon above, an old man is lying alone on the street, looking so helpless. Numerous bystanders watch him chillily, but no one is willing to offer help.
Nothing gets people talking like the topic—whether we should lend a helping hand to old people who have fallen or not. Nowadays, helping the fallen elderly people becomes less simple. People are unwilling or do not dare to help the aged injured on the street in that they are afraid of being framed up and putting themselves in troubles. Recently, the frequent reports that help-givers have been falsely identified as the offenders illustrate this point. In these cases, some greedy senior citizens tend to take advantages of warm-hearted people's kindness for financial gains. Such actions discourage people from taking steps to help the aged. These actions, seemingly personal behaviors, actually undermine social trust, pushing the traditional virtue into a vague embarrassment.
Greediness for wealth will poison social atmosphere. Therefore, people should be educated to realize the value of social trust and voluntarily protect it. Meanwhile, we should still hold faith in human nature, and use common sense to judge the aged in need of help and the situation carefully at that moment before offering help.
正如上面的漫画所描绘的，一位老人正孤零零地躺在街上，显得非常无助。无数看客冷眼旁观，却没有人愿意施以援手。
没有什么能像“我们是否应该帮助摔倒的老人”这一话题一样更能引发人们的讨论了。现如今，帮助摔倒的老人已不再是一件简单的事。人们之所以不愿意或者不敢帮助路边摔倒的老人，是害怕被诬陷以及给自己带来麻烦。最近频繁发生的将提供帮助者错认为是肇事者的报道就说明了这一点。在这些事件中，一些贪婪的老人往往利用古道热肠的人们的善举来换取经济利益。这样的行为使人们不愿采取行动来帮助老人。这些行为表面上看起来只是个人行为，
实际上却瓦解了社会信任，使传统美德陷入了一种莫名的尴尬。
对财富的贪婪污染了社会风气，所以我们应该教育人们，使大家意识到社会信任的重要性，并自觉地保护它。同时，我们仍然应相信人性的善，并在提供帮助之前，利用常识仔细判断寻求帮助的老人和当时的情况。
靓词靓语
chillily ad.冷漠地
frame up栽赃；陷害
illustrate v.说明，解释
take advantages of 利用
graphically ad.形象地；生动地
lend a helping hand 帮助；施以援手
identify v.把……看作一致；使等同于
discourage v.阻拦；使气馁
靓句分析
① Nothing gets people talking like the topic—whether we should lend a helping hand to old people who have fallen or not.
本句划线部分可视作模板句式，用于揭示图画所隐含的话题。亮点如下：(1)主语虽为否定词“Nothing”，却辅助该句表达肯定含义，加强语气的同时突显出了该话题受争议的程度；(2)使用破折号引出“the topic”的具体内容，直截了当。
②These actions, seemingly personal behaviors, actually undermine social trust, pushing the traditional virtue into a vague embarrassment.
继上文批判了一些贪婪老人的不恰当行为之后，本句将该行为的影响由个人上升至整个社会，点明问题的严重性，也为三段从社会角度展开论述做好了铺垫。从句式结构来看，本句以名词短语“seemingly personal behaviors”作插入语，表现人们对“These actions”的表面认识，接着以副词“actually”转换话锋，揭示出这些行为的实质性影响，且辅以现在分词短语“pushing…”作状语，进一步说明后果的严重性。
源自《写作160篇》
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