Directions:
You are studying at university and one of your lecturers has asked his students to write and suggest ways in which he could improve his teaching.
Write an email to the lecturer. Say the way you enjoy about his lectures and suggest how they could be improved.
预测范文
Dear Professor Byron,
Last week you asked students to write and give you feedback on your lectures. Therefore, I have outlined my thoughts below.
In general, I find your lectures very informative and inspiring. Indeed, I particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues with the use of simple drawings. This makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. However, I do feel that you could provide us with more handouts, as I often don’t have time to take down all the important points. I would also like to see more discussion work, as I find this method the most suitable way to clarify and deepen my understanding of the subject content.
I’d like to thank you for the interest you are taking in your students and look forward to your next lecture.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
尊敬的拜伦教授：
上周您要求学生写信告诉您关于您课程的反馈。因此，我已列明我的想法如下。
总而言之，我发现您的课程信息量大、令人鼓舞。事实上，我非常喜欢您使用简单图画来阐明复杂问题的方式。这使得您的课程既有趣又令人印象深刻。然而，由于我经常没时间记下所有的要点，我确实感到您能给我们提供更多的印刷讲义。由于我发现课堂讨论是澄清和加深我对课程内容理解的最佳方式，因此我想有更多的课堂讨论。
非常感谢您对学生的关注，期待您的下次课程。
您真诚的，
李明
亮点词汇
professor教授 feedback反馈 lecture讲座 outline列明 thought想法 below如下 in general总而言之 informative信息量大的 inspiring令人鼓舞的 indeed事实上 particularly非常 demonstrate阐明 complex复杂的 issue问题 simple简单的 drawing图画 memorable令人印象深刻的 do确实 handout印刷讲义 take down记下 discussion讨论 method方法 suitable最佳的 clarify澄清 deepen加深 understanding理解 subject课程 content内容
道长点评
建议信首段应表明写作意图，简要介绍自己，注意语气，切勿罗嗦。次段应针对情况提出具体建议或忠告，应首先肯定优点，再写需要改进，否则对方以为是投诉而非建。尾段应总结建议，注意礼貌原则。建议信很容易写成议论文，应时刻考虑读者感受，给对方提建议时经常提到I和you。
经典句型
Directions:
One of your foreign friends plans to go sightseeing in China. Write an email to recommend one place.
预测范文
Dear George,
I hear that you are planning a sightseeing trip in China. Well, I have just returned from a place I am sure you will enjoy. It is Xi’an, the capital of Shaanxi Province, and one of the most wonderful tourist destinations in the country.
Xi’an, called Chang’an in the old days, was the capital of seven dynasties, and so the place is full of ancient relics. I spent one week there, and didn’t have the chance to see even half of them. But the major attractions are the terracotta warriors guarding the tomb of China’s first emperor, the Flying Goose Pagoda and the Banpo Prehistoric Village.
Xi’an boasts plenty of modern hotels and restaurants, but they are not particularly cheap, so take lots of money with you. I hope you have as much fun as I had.
Yours，
Li Ming
参考译文
亲爱的乔治：
我听说你计划来中国旅游。好吧，我刚从一个地方回来，你肯定会喜欢。就是西安，陕西省的省会，中国最精彩的旅游目的地之一。
西安过去也称长安，是七朝古都，因此遍地古迹。我在那儿住了一周，都没能参观完一半的景点。但主要的景点是守护中国第一位皇帝的兵马俑，大雁塔以及半坡史前遗址。
西安拥有众多现代饭店，但它们并不便宜，因此多带点钱吧。我希望你也像我一样开心。
李明
亮点词汇
sightseeing观光 trip旅行 well好吧 return回来 be sure确信 capital省会 Shaanxi Province陕西省 wonderful精彩的 tourist旅游的 destination目的地 Chang’an长安 in the old days过去 dynasty朝代 is full of遍布 ancient古代的 relic遗迹 spend度过 chance机会 half一半 major主要的 attraction景点 terracotta warrior兵马俑 guard守护 tomb坟墓 emperor皇帝 the Flying Goose Pagoda大雁塔 the Banpo Prehistoric Village半坡史前遗址 boost拥有 plenty of众多的 modern现代的 hotel饭店 restaurant饭店 particularly特别 cheap便宜的 fun开心
道长点评
推荐信首段应开宗明义；次段客观介绍相关情况，以便对方更全面了解；尾段希望对方考虑自己的推荐。语气应真诚、一心一意；信的内容应符合事实，不应夸大其词或过度夸奖。应清楚表明自己作为推荐人的态度，或毫无保留或有所保留。
经典句型
传统文化作为无价的精神财富应该被保存和珍惜。
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