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英语作文:当我生病的时候When I Was ill

Five daysago, I had a terrible headache and ran a high temperature. The doctor told meto stay in hospital. These days I was very lonely, I stayed in the sick bed andlooked at the white wardquietly every day. I couldn’t help thinkingof my teachers and classmates.

5天前,我头痛得厉害,还发起了高烧。医生告诉我要住院。这些天,我很寂寞,每天躺在病床上,望着这个寂静洁白的病房。我不禁想念起我的老师和同学们。

When Ifelt a little better, I wanted to leave hospital at once. One afternoon thedoctor agreed that I could leave. It meant I would see my friends again nextday! On my way home, I found the air outside was nice and fresh.

当感觉好些,我立刻想出院。一天下午,医生同意我出院。这意味着隔天我就可以和朋友们见面了!回家的路上,我发现外面天气晴朗,空气清新。

As soonas I arrived at home, I was busy going over my lessons. Suddenly, there was aknock at the door. “Who is it?” I thought. When I opened the door I shouted, “JiangMin!” She was my best friend. Behind her were my head teacher Mr. Hu and someof my classmates. “Come in!” I said with a big smile. How surprised and happy Iwas! One of them said, “You were ill in hospital, weren’t you? We were sorry tohear that.” Another one smiled, saying, “We went to the hospital just now, butyou had already gone.” Mr. Hu said, “We all hope you will get well soon.Welcome back to school.” I was so excited that I didn’t know what to say orwhat to do. I only said, “Thank you for coming to see me. Thanks a lot.” Theyalso asked about my illness and told me to have a good rest and not to worryabout the lessons. Then they said good-bye to me.

一到家,我就忙着复习功课。突然,传来了敲门声。“是谁啊?”我忖度着。当我打开大门时不禁喊道,“姜敏!”她是我最好的朋友。她身后站着的是我们的班主任胡老师和同学们。 “进来吧!”我边说边乐得合不拢嘴。这真是喜出望外!有个同学说:“你得病住院了,是吧?听到这个消息大家都很担心。” 另一个同学笑着说“我们刚去了医院,但是你已经走了。”胡老师说:“我们都希望你能早日康复。欢迎回到学校来。”我感动得不知所措。只好说:“谢谢你们来看望我。非常感谢。” 大家还询问了我的病情,叫我好好休息,不要担心课程。然后他们就告辞了。

I lookedat the food they had brought to me. “How kind they are!” I said to myself, “Imust make up forthe lessons I missed. I will try my best and study harder.”

我看着他们带给我的慰问品。“大家对我真好!”我心想,“我必须赶上进度。我会全力以赴,刻苦学习的。 


【词语解释】
ward  n. 病房
make up for 弥补
【写法指要】
按理说,人病了应该是一件悲伤的事,但是本文作者选择的题材恰恰是从其反面切入,写的是喜悦的心情。这是作者选材的成功之处。文章用了渐进(climax)的宏观修辞手法,使喜悦心情由低潮逐渐达到高潮,这点可以从几处的选词和手法看得出来:nice and fresh(第二段)→surprised and happy(第三段前半部分)→so excited(第三段后面)→How kind they are!(结尾段)。这真可谓匠心独运的手笔!

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