The university wants to provide student more entertainments and three choices provided below. Which do you prefer and why?
·A theater performance by the student actors;
·A concert provided by professional musician;
·A lecture from a professor;
第一步 ：解析题目类型：三选一题目：A/B+C 的模式；
第二步：分析难点：
难度较大； 切记：A与B+C的共性特征做比较。
第三步：构思全文的结构：
核心逻辑如同对题目分析环节所述:A >B+C⇒to entertain university students well 这等价于论证;
A>( better于 B+C)在于a1方面⇒to entertain university students well .
于是各个段落的论述就是在做：
A>( better于 B+C )在于a1方面⇒to entertain university students well .
A>( better于 B+C )在于a2方面⇒to entertain university students well .
A>( better于 B+C )在于a3方面⇒to entertain university students well .
第四步 ： 写出具体理由：比如说如下的理由
a1:（比“选择B”和“选择C”）更多学生愿意参与，popularity 更好！
a2:（比“选择B”和“选择C”）更多创意融入，更好符合学生的taste！
a3: （比“选择B”和“选择C”）更有机会培育他们对于高尚美aesthetic values的欣赏！
第五步：托福作文官方（依据）范文。
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An age of popular entertainment lures.Super stars, talk show hosts,hi-pop singers , or even the cyber celebrities from the populaceare the group who are enjoying great fame and wealth.A fact to young university students , entertainment is even more prevalent and needed. But a question is how to entertain them better - performance by the student actors, the concert by professional musicians or a lecture by a professor? Based on the thorough analysis, the plan of students’ performance in theatre will be the first choice .
First , the plan of students’ performance in theatre, rather than the plan of concert by professionals and the one of lecture by professors ,will attract a wider range of students to engage in such an entertainment .
Second , my proposal rather than the counterpart ones will better suit students taste-more enjoyment will be hoped.
Last , considering the classical masterpieces needed in rehearse, my suggestions will cultivate the more genuine and deeper love for appreciation for aesthetic values.
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