圣诞节快乐
好长时间没有发表文字了。这段时间，潜心打造我的写作王中王第八版。今天圣诞节，先祝福大家圣诞快乐。
作文不常写，写作技能就会生疏，这是必然的。但是每次写一定要有所突破，才会有效，其中一个好方法就是把别人的好作文的好文笔内化为己有。下面这篇文字用到了很多高级词块，个别是四级常用词汇，相信对成绩非常好的读者也会有用。我一贯主张，先广泛阅读大量的同类话题作文，然后下笔，调用自己的思维，用上积累的词块。
欢迎大家提出更好的写法建议。非常感谢。
老题目：评价虎爸虎妈的严苛教育
本题目可以用在所有父母不当的教育方式上，可以随意拓展。
开头段：不赞成这种方式
In China, the idea that “spare a rod, spoil a child' has been rooted in a family from generation to generation. Personally, such severe parenting styles could be counterproductive.
主体内容：
1.削弱创造力和想象力
2.不利于培养沟通能力
Firstly, the controlling methods weaken children's creativity and imagination. （后面开始说明原因）The fast-changing society favors those who will try something new and do away with old routines. （从反面来说明）Unfortunately, many parents confine children's behaviors and thoughts to a cramped space, depriving them of the freedom to set their minds free.
Secondly, they pose a great threat to the cultivation of communicative ability. (后面具体解释threat） Children subjected to high-pressure parenting for long tend to make compromises and blindly follow the footsteps of others.
结尾：
In conclusion, the styles of tiger mothers should be abandoned though their children may be modest and lead a secure life in the future. （主题句用一个though说明了虎妈教育并非都是缺点，后面来了个转折，以退为进。）However, they will wear down the children's bravery to voice different ideas and fight for their own interests, which makes them obedient and mediocre in the end.
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好词好句：
spare a rod, spoil a child孩子不打不成器
be rooted in扎根于
counterproductive事与愿违的
weaken children's creativity and imagination削弱孩子的创造力和想象力
favor青睐于
try something new尝试新的
do away with打破，去除
confine…to…把……限制在……
deprive them of剥夺……的……
set their minds free释放；让自由
pose a great threat to对……构成危害
the cultivation of……的培养
communicative ability沟通能力
be subjected to屈服于
tend to往往
make compromises妥协
blindly follow the footsteps of others亦步亦趋
lead a secure life过着安稳的生活
wear down消磨
fight for their own interests为自己的利益去争取
obedient and mediocre顺从和平庸
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