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写你喜欢看的作文:交际话题之意见分歧

昨天圣诞节,在听英国女王的圣诞致辞后,突然想写这篇作文。毫无理由的。

复制昨天的话:

作文不常写,写作技能就会生疏,这是必然的。但是每次写一定要有所突破,才会有效,其中一个好方法就是把别人的好作文的好文笔内化为己有。下面这篇文字用到了很多高级词块,个别是四级常用词汇,相信对成绩非常好的读者也会有用。我一贯主张,先广泛阅读大量的同类话题作文,然后下笔,调用自己的思维,用上积累的词块。

欢迎大家提出更好的写法建议。非常感谢。

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题目:

在我们合作的过程中,经常小组里出现不同的声音,如何看待不同的声音并且取得一致的声音。

写作过程:

首段导入:说明分歧的坏处:破坏合作和孤立成员

(话题导入 解释说明结果 明确立场)

Nowadays, along with people from different backgrounds come many conflicts in a community, which, if not handled properly, may threaten cooperation. (这个句子比较复杂的,主句是倒装句,定语从句里含有状语从句的省略结构,属于:现象 结果的思维模式)  For example, it makes members gradually lose support and isolate themselves. (对前面的threat继续解释) Therefore,great efforts should be made to achieve a universal voice.(最后提出观点)

中间段:解释立场,说明消除分歧争取统一的声音的好处

First, it can help achieve high working efficiency. Obviously, a group where all members unite as one is usually full of passion and strength. Otherwise, a lot of time will be spent convincing each other. (展开方式:主题句 解释 反向说明) Second, it contributes to a friendly environment in which everyone can work with a good mood. By contrast, individuals with strong opinions are inclined to be aggressive, imposing great pressure on others. (展开方式:主题句 反向说明)

结尾段:提出建议

Personally, even with the most deeply held differences, treating the other person with respect is always a good first step towards greater understanding. Also, a good listening can gain you deep empathy with others. Both will be a source of personal comfort and reassurance in various conflicts.

(158个词)

好词好句:

Along with…come…两个事物一起发生

if not handled properly如果处理不好

lose support失去支持

isolate themselves孤立自我

mutual respect相互尊重

achieve high working efficiency赢得高效

full of passion and strength充满激情和力量

with a good mood好心情

are inclined to倾向于

imposing great pressure on对……施加压力

gain you deep empathy with others带来共鸣

a source of personal comfort and reassurance安抚和宽慰的来源

注:最后一段是2018圣诞节英国女王致辞里的。

But through the many changes I have seen over the years, faith, family and friendship have been not only a constant for mebut a source of personal comfort and reassurance.但纵观这些年间诸事变迁。我的信仰,家庭和友谊不仅是我永恒的坚守,同时也是我的安抚和宽慰。

Even with the most deeply held differences,treating the other person with respect and as a fellow human being is always agood first step towards greater understanding.即使彼此间存在最根深蒂固的分歧,视对方为同侪、待他人以尊重永远是增进理解的第一步。

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