写作文的绞尽脑汁写漂亮句子，但改卷子老师是不会把你的句子一个个拿出来分析的，而是一眼看过去讲究一个感觉：舒服。做到舒服就要牢记以下要点。
一、要规避三点：
✘ 创造词块。
✘ 句子过于复杂。
✘ 逻辑混淆。
二、要做到三点：
1
语言准确。
2
思路清晰。
3
逻辑得当。
说明：
写作首先要保证正确，正确，正确。写作方法千万条，正确排在第一条。
做到语言准确，就要学会：词块不要乱凑；不要用太长的句子，尽量就一个常用句型。这样的最靠谱：介词短语 主谓宾；主谓宾 定语从句或非谓语。如果主谓宾是it句型，there be句型，那就不要再添加了，妥妥的了。
举例：
评：
以下句子
1.Despite its currency, there remain many tough nuts, say, the potential safety risks to crack.
2. The scale of consumers of fast food delievry service, a burgeoning industry featuring convenience and innovation, had increased to 350 million by 2018.
3. ...not infrequent...
两个考生的这句，虽然看起来高大上，但是读过后不舒服，currency只有在gain currency中才常见，the scale...不怎么和increase搭配，burgeoning超纲了。尤其第二句，主语太长，不符合英语标准。其实就是一句话： Fast food delievry service has enjoyed increasing popularity nowadays. 最后一个句子，not infrequent就几乎没见过这样的表达。
再如正文段：（不再贴图）
1. Behind the popularity of the fast food delievry service lie numerous factors.
2. The advancement of technique makes it possible to emerge and boom.
3. What's more, the fast food enterprises are supposed to exploit and sell diversise and more tastetul food...
4. To begin with, everyone has his own personality and habits, and there is no necessity to force people like Matti to make modifications.
实际上就写了两个原因，用numerous给人华而不实的感觉。
至于第二句就看不懂了，emerge估计按照中文硬翻译过来的。
exploit food，意思我大概明白，但是给人一看就是汉式英语。
there is no necessity实际是there is no need, make modificaitons也不准确。
说了这么多，建议读者要牢记以下常用词块。
1.重视
attach/give/place much importance/significance to
give top priority to
value sth
2.上瘾、沉迷
be addicted to sth. 上瘾
be obsessed with 沉迷于
indulge in 沉湎于
3.问题
give rise to / create / pose / cause the problem 造成问题
address / fix / solve / handle / settle / cope with / deal with the problem 解决问题
pose a threat to对……造成威胁
4.影响
have （a） negative / positive effects / impacts on sth. 对……产生正面 / 负面影响
weigh against sb对……有不利的影响
interfere with one’s study / rest / the development / progress对某人的学习/休息/发展/进步有影响
5.作用
play a（n） central / crucial / important / key / leading role in sth. 在……扮演重要/主要角色
6.责任
be responsible for sth. 对某事承担责任
do one’s part to do sth. 尽某人的职责去做某事
7.时间
spend time/ money （in） doing sth. 花时间（金钱）在做……上
a waste of time 浪费时间
8.注意
pay attention to sth. / doing sth. 对……关注
attract / bring / catch / draw / receive / win attention 吸引/ 获得注意、关注
distract one's attention from... 分散 / 转移注意、关注
9.贡献
make contributions to do sth. 为某事作出贡献
contribute to sth. 有助于做某事
10.好坏
benefit from sth./ doing sth. 从……当中获益
do good to sth. 对某事有好处
be harmful to / on 对……有害（to为介词）
11.努力
make an effort to do sth. 努力去做某事
spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力地做某事
make every effort to do sth. 尽一切努力做某事
12.措施
take effective / practical measures / actions / steps to do sth. 采取有效措施做某事
take concrete actions to do sth. 采取切实的行动做某事
13.途径、方法
1. the stepping stone to a better job / success 成功的途径
2. find / obtain a channel for one 's effort (ability / energy)； find / seek an outlet for one's strong emotion(eg. pressure) 找到发泄精力、实现理想的渠道、途径
14.事情
1.as a primary / national / growing concern首要的/国家的/越来越受到关注的事情
2. a frequent / common / rare / everyday occurrence一件常遇到的/普遍的/少有的/日常的事情
3. a thing of the past过去的事情
15 获得
gain experience / confidence / happiness / wealth得到经验/自信/幸福/财富
gain / achieve popularity / reputation赢得名望/声誉
earn/win sb the opportunity / respect / trust / privilege某人赢得了机会/尊敬/信任/特权
16 目标
accomplish (attain, reach, achieve) the goal/aim达到目标
fail to live up to one’s expectations / promise没有达到某人的期待/承诺
realize / fulfill/achieve one’s dream/hopes/expectation/potential实现理想/希望/目标/潜力
17.发生
Along with the development / decline…comes sth.某事随着……的发展/下降发生了
With the coming / development of随着……的出现/发展
There is a (strong) tendency to do sth.有一种倾向
18. 给予
provide sb with information / money给人提供信息/钱
a source of happiness / satisfaction带来幸福/满足
deprive / rob sb. of the opportunity剥夺某人的机会
19.缓解
relieve suffering / anxiety / boredom减轻痛苦/焦虑/烦躁
20. 促进
promote the development / mutual understanding / health促进发展/相互理解/健康
serve as (be) the catalyst for the development / growth起到促进作用
further one’s career / cultural exchanges / interests促进事业/文化交流/兴趣
21.有助于
contribute much/little/greatly to a better understanding of / the popularity of / the growth of（非常/几乎不）有助于更好理解/流行/增长
facilitate the mastery / the solution to有助于掌握/解决
go a long way to(towards) solving the problem / easing fears有助于解决问题/缓解恐惧
22. 可能
It is likely/possible that可能
Chances are that可能
make … possible使可能
23. 挑战
pose a challenge to sb提出挑战
face a challenge面对挑战
take / accept a challenge接受挑战
24.满足
meet（satisfy, suit, fulfill, serve, accommodate）the need / demand满足要求
there is a growing dissatisfaction / discontent with…越来越不满足于
25. 利用
make ( full/ practical) use of opportunity / time利用机会/时间
exploit the resources / opportunity / talent利用开发资源/机会/智慧
26. 发挥
give full play to one’s ability / imagination / passion充分发挥一个人能力/想象力/热情
develop one’s ability / potential to the full充分发挥某人的潜力
27.榜样
follow the example/lead of学习……的榜样
serve as an example作为一个榜样
set a good example for为树立好榜样
28.准备
pave the way for为……铺平道路
prepare sb for the change / future使某人对变化/未来作好准备
29.责任
assume (bear / shoulder) the responsibility for承担责任
fulfill one’s duties / responsibilities履行责任
30. 重要性
be crucial / vital / important / central / important to对……重要
be essential to对……必不可少的
make a difference有作用
play an important role in起重要作用
31.意识到
realize意识到
there is a (growing) awareness / realization of / that越来越多的人认识到
awaken (sb) to the fact / truth / need / danger that使人意识到事实/真相/需要/危险
32.代替
be no substitute for不能替代
take the place of代替
give way to the ideas / TV让位给这种想法/电视
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