高考英语书面表达冲分训练4·建议信

一．考点综述

建议信是针对朋友、同事等写的求助信的回复，或对某种不合理的应该纠正的情况提出自己的看法和建议。写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。

二．真题再现

1.【题目要求】
（2017·北京卷）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.你建议的线路；

2.你的理由；

3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.【范文品读】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.  That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua　

三．要点总结

1.【建议信结构以及实例说明 】

1. 写信目的；

2. 介绍详情、说明原因；

3. 提出建议。

（写信目的）I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.

（介绍详情、说明原因）Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.

（给出建议）Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.  That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

（表达祝愿）Hope you’ll have a good time in China.

2.【建议信常用词汇】
1.gve/offer sb.  some advice(on)  给某人提建议
2.ask sb.for advice  向某人征求意见
3.as follows  如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..helpful/useful/beneficial  认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in...  参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice采纳某人的建议
8.take sth.into account/consideration  把……考虑在内
9.with regard to关于；就
10. put forward    提出
11.in this regard/in this respect  在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on   随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with  面临
15.take sth. seriously  重视；认真对待

3.【建议信常用句型结构】
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble ...很遗憾听说你在...有困难。
2. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
3. I have received your letter saying you plan to...我已经收到了你的来信。信上说。。。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ..很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何。。。。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to ...很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在。。。，我写信给你一些建议。
7. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
8.Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
9. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
10. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
11. Here are a few suggestions.

模拟强化

【Writing 1】 假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑难以控制。请你给他回一封信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、损害家庭关系等问题，并提出一些建议。
参考词汇：沉溺于be/become addicted to  网瘾：Internet addiction。

【Writing 2】 假定你叫李华，你的美国朋友Jack 来信，说他寒假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信，提几点建议，要点如下:
1. 大胆自信;  2. 放慢语速;  3. 借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。
注意:1. 词数80-100; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

【Writing 1】
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear from you. As your close friend, I’d like to talk about the harm of Internet addiction to you as I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.
As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it. For example your grades may go down and your health will be going from bad to worse. To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family. So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit. It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercise.
I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon．
Yours,
Li Hua

【Writing 2】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going ? I’m glad to learn that you’re going to China this winter. You say you’re worried about your Chinese if you are in China. Now let me give you some advice.
Fisrt, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. We Chinese are very friendly, so you don’t be afraid to make any mistakes. Second, speak Chinese slowly and clearly when you talk to others. In this way, you can make yourself understood easily. Finally, you can use pictures or drawings and body language. As you know, most of body language is in common in the world.
I hope these suggestions will help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua