Two days before, our school had an opening ceremony in the school auditorium. All the teachers and students as well as some famous scientists and government official attended to the ceremony. Our principal made a speech, in which he hope everybody in our school will make the greatest efforts and make even more progress in the new term. At the ceremony, excellent students were present with prizes and our principal also announced that some honour students had won medals in various competitions, who is the pride of our school. Eventually a famous scientist told the students about their learning experience and what he achieves success in his research work. So moving was I by what he said that I made up my mind to learn him and study harder in the new term.
1、before修改为ago。before表示一段时间以前，表示从过去或将来某一时间算起多少时间以前，与这一时间状语连用的行为先发生在过去或将来完成时态中；ago表示一段时间以前，指的是从现在起到过去时间的某一点的一段时间，常与一般过去时态或过去进行时态连用。本文在此指的是从现在算起的两天起，且文章用的是一般过去时态，所以将before改为ago；
2、official为可数名词，与前面的teachers、students和scientists相对应，该处也应用复数形式，所以正确答案为将official改为officials；
3、attend表示“出席”、attend to表示“照料”，该句句意是“所有的老师、学生和一些著名的科学家和政府官员出席了这次典礼”，在此处表示“出席的”意思，所以正确答案将attend前的to去掉;
4、此处是描述校长现阶段怀有的希望，因而该处应用一般现在时而不是一般过去时，此句为定语从句，从句的主语为he，谓语动词需要将hope改为hopes；
5、be presented with是表示“获赠、被授予奖品'，所以将present改为presented；
6、这是一个非限制性定语从句，先行词为excellent students were present with prizes and our principal also announced that some honour students had won medals in various competitions这整个句子，而指代这件事情，所以定语从句要用which引导，将who改为which；
7、此处指代前文 a famous scientist，为单数，their表示“他们的”，指代复数，所以正确答案为将their改为his；
8、“what he achieves success in his research work”在and之后作宾语从句，从句中不缺主语和宾语，所以不用what，缺的是方式状语，所以要用how来引导，故正确答案为将what改为how；
9、so位于句首时句子用倒转，该句表示“我被他说的话如此感动以至于...”，原句为I was so moved by...，倒转之后应该为So moved was I by...，所以将moving改为moved；
10、learn为不及物动词，在其后接宾语时要用介词from，所以正确答案为在learn和him之间添加from。
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