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重磅! 干货! 高考英语全国卷中求助信写作导练

文章出自百试乐英语,纪乐佳老师

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高考英语全国卷中求助信写作导练

一、文体概述

求助信指当个人遇到问题无法解决时向别人求助或请别人代劳自己无法完成的事情的一种书信,通常包括求助与请求两种形式。其内容一般为:直言目的(求助/请求)——描述困难——希望得到帮助并表示感激——(联系方式)。写作时应注意求助目的的表述要清楚明了,语气要真诚、委婉。

二、必备短语

1. ask sb. a favor 请某人帮忙   
2. ask forek help  寻求帮助   
3. come across some problems遇到一些问题   
4. be faced with difficulties面对困难   
5. have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.做某事有困难   
6. plan to do sth计划做某事   . 
7. make preparations for sth.为...做准备   
8. offer sb. a hand提供帮助   
9 . offer some constructive guidance提供一些有建设性的指导   
10. be grateful to sb. for sth.感谢某人某事

三、套用句式

1. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for …and I also want you to do me a favor. 我写信告诉您一些关于我计划做…的事情,并想请您帮帮我。

2. Unfortunately, I find it really difficult to… 不幸的是,我发现做…很困难。

3. Faced with the problems mentioned above, I am eager for your help, and would you please give me some advice on…?  面对上述问题,我真希望能得到您的帮助;您能给我一些关于…的建议吗?

4. I would be very grateful if you could… 如果您能…,我将不胜感激。

5. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply. 谢谢您的关注,期待尽早收到您的回复。

四、习作修改

(下列范文中共有10处错误,每句最多两处,请改正)

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I am Li Hua. I am written to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation. And I also want you to do me the favor.

In order to get some special experiences, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I had already finished my job application and personal resume. But this are the first time I have written an application or personal resume. So I don’t even know if there is anything to pay attention. So, I am writing you this letter, hope you can give me some help. I will be very much grateful if you can help me.

Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be real thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

五、课堂练习

假定你是李华,下周你将为学校的英语角活动当主持。你写信给外教Ms. Jenkins,向她求助。要点如下:

1. 当英语角的主持应该注意什么

2. 帮你修改发言稿

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

六、课外作业

假定你是李华,昨天晚上在图书馆自习回来后,发现你的一本英语词典不见,现写邮件给图书馆管理员Ms. Jenkins,请他们帮忙寻找。要点如下:

1. 写信的目的;

2. 英语词典对你的意义;

3. 如果找到请他们帮忙保管好。

注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考答案与范文:

习作修改

本篇写的是李华写信向Ms Jenkins求助,希望她能指点一下自己如何写好申请书和个人简历。

1. written→writing 主语是I,主动发出动作,表明此时正在写信,用writing。

2. the→ a  因do sb. a favor 为固定搭配,意为帮某人一个忙,故the改为a。

3. experiences→experience  因这里指获得经验,experience意为经验时为不可数名词,故没有复数形式。

4. had→have  因本文为求助信,结合上下文此处时态应为一般现在时,故改成have。

5. are→is   因此处主语是this,且结合上下文时态应为一般现在时,故改成is。

6. or→and  因此处结合上下文应该是指作者既写了入职申请又写了个人简历,故改为and。

7. 在pay attention后加to   因pay attention to为固定搭配,且前有其宾语anything,故加to。

8. hope→hoping   因此处为目的状语,且hope与其逻辑主语I 是主动关系,故用hoping。

9. much去掉  因very副词修饰形容词grateful,无需再加much,故将其去掉。

10. real→really   应该用副词修饰形容词thankful。

课堂练习

Dear Ms. Jenkins,

I am Li Hua. Worried about how to be a host, I’m writing to ask for your help.

An English corner will be held in our school next week. I will be the host, but I am not sure how to do it well because it will be the first time that I have done the job. Could you please tell me what I should pay attention to?Are there any special ways of saying things on this occasion? Besides, I have prepared a speech. But I’m afraid that there are some grammar mistakes. So I hope you can give me some advice. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

课外作业

Dear Ms. Jenkins,

I am Li Hua. I studied in the library last night. But when I came back to my dorm, I suddenly realized that I had left my English dictionary behind in the library.

It is a precious gift from my American teacher. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. Would you please be so kind as to look for the dictionary for me? If you can find it, please keep it. And I will get it back tomorrow afternoon. I will appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.

Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua。文章出自百试乐英语,纪乐佳老师。

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