2. 是否应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3. 语法结构和词汇方面的应用是否准确，是否能正确使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇。
4. 是否能灵活使用语句的连接成分，全文结构是否紧凑
■过渡用语
①表示时间顺序：first，then，afterwards，meanwhile，later…
②表示空间顺序：near，next to，far from，in front of，on the left，on one side…
③表示比较、对照：like，unlike，such as，but，however，on the other hand，on the contrary、nevertheless…
④表示因果关系：because，for，as a result，therefore，thus…
⑤表示递进关系：besides，what’s more，more over，in addition…
⑥表示并列关系：and，as well as，also……
⑦表示总结性：in general，in a word，in short，on the whole…
首先, 第一: initially, to begin with, to start with
其次, 第二, 第三, 第四……: furthermore, moreover, in addition, besides
最后: finally, last but not the least
现在(目前), XXXX现象是不可避免且难以否认的
Currently, there is an inevitable and undeniable fact that ……
At present, it is inevitable and undeniable that …..
例句: Currently, there is an inevitable and undeniable fact that computer is playing a significant role in our daily lives
At present, it is inevitable and undeniable that advertisement has been flooding into our daily lives
随着社会(科技)的发展,人们开始注意到XXXX的重要性
Along with the advance of the society (science and technology), people are attaching much importance to ……
例句: Along with the advance of the society, people are attaching more and more importance to the interview in the job-hunting
最近, XXXXX现象引起了人们的广泛关注
Recently, the phenomenon of (that) …… has aroused wide public concern
例句: Recently, the phenomenon that CPI keeps increasing has aroused wide public concern
一部分人认为……., 而另一部分人认为……
Some people argue that….., whereas others maintain that….
就我个人而言(老实说), 我全力支持前者(后者)
As for me, I am in high favor of the former (latter)
Personally, I side with the former (latter)
Frankly speaking/ To be frank/ To be honest/ Honestly speaking, it is the former (latter) that I approve of
我认为(在我看来,就我看来,我的观点是, 我想….)
I am convinced that….
As far as I am concerned, …..
To my point of view, …..
From where I stand, ……
作为一把双刃剑
as a two-bladed sword, as a double-edged sword
因此, 基于以上讨论, 我们很容易得出……的结论
Hence (Consequently), based on the discussion above, it is easy for us to draw the conclusion that…..
作文中一些可用来替换常用词汇的高级词汇
important—significant good—stunning, fabulous, sensational way—approach, method
use—adopt understand/know—figure out but—nevertheless so—consequently, therefore
because of—due to like to do/want to do—be inclined to do, be willing to do finish—accomplish advantages and disadvantages—pros and cons
●记叙性文章
①At first he didn’t hear anything at all.
②But then a sudden knock on the door woke him up.
③Following that came a man’s voice saying “Come out，or I will break in”.
④Several minutes later , he heard someone leave.
⑤Finally he got up, opened the door and looked around.
写人
①She is a girl of twelve years old.
②She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.
③Being kind and helpful， she always enjoys helping others out.
④In her spare time she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.
⑤She gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.
●介绍某地
① Liaoning Province lies in the northeast of China.
②It is rich in many kinds of natural resources such as coal and petrol.
③It has a population of 23 million.
④It is terribly cold in winter and very hot in summer there.
⑤The people there are friendly and hardworking and their hospitality will never fail to give you a deep impression.●通知用语
①Attention please./May I have your attention please.
②The sports meet to be held tomorrow is canceled due to the bad weather.
③A meeting is to be held in Room 203 at two o’clock tomorrow afternoon.
④Please take a pen and notebook with you and be there on time.
⑤That’s all， thank you.
●写信
①Dear Tom I’m very glad to receive your letter.
②I am fine but very busy recently learning English.
③I have been strictly following the advice given by you in your last letter and have made some progress so far.④Please remember me to your parents.⑤Yours truly Li Ming
●议论
①In my opinion ，I prefer traveling by train rather than by plane.
②For one thing a train ticket is much cheaper than a plane ticket.
③For another you can enjoy the beautiful views outside the train window
④Above all it’s safer traveling on a train than traveling in a plane.
⑤In a word ，I will always travel by train if I’m not in a great hurry
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