【往期回顾】
英语作文高分写作技巧81：中学生如何提高自我保护能力（议论文）
【本期内容】
一、作文题目
上个月末你的父母带你去参观了博物馆，请以“My visit to the museum”为题，介绍一下你的博物馆之旅。词数：≥80。
二、技巧点拨
（一）审题立意
根据题目说明，本篇作文在体裁上是一篇记叙文，要求介绍自己的博物馆之旅。
（二）谋篇布局
根据题目内容和体裁，本篇短文可分三段进行写作。
1、第一段
简单交代博物馆之旅的时间地点。
2、第二段
详细介绍自己在博物馆的所见所闻。
3、第三段
简单总结本次博物馆之旅的感受。
（三）遣词造句
1、第一段
本段主要用来交代博物馆之旅的时间和地点。如下面的范文所示：
It was a sunny Saturday morning. My parents took me to the Silk Museum.
【注意】
本段既可以用一句话同时把时间地点交代清楚，也可以分两句话介绍。如果用一句话，可以这样介绍：On a sunny Saturday morning, my parents took me to the Silk Museum.
注意，take sb. to sw.表示“带某人去某地”；注意丝绸博物馆的silk和museum首字母要大写。
2、第二段
本段主要用来详细描述在博物馆的所见所闻。如下面的范文所示：
The museum is very large, and there were many exquisite ancient silk products on display. I did not really feel like appreciating the silk exhibits, but while we were at the entrance of the museum, a 'female’ robot caught my eyes, because she was wearing nice silk clothes and could speak English! I said “Hello, how old are you?” to her and she promptly answered “Hello, I am two years old.” to me. Then I asked her a few questions about the exhibits, and she, like a professional guide, introduced some of the most representative exhibits to me, in ENGLISH! When my parents told me to walk on, I took a photo with the robot.
【注意】
本段的内容既可以侧重对某些丝绸展品的描述，也可以选择自己在博物馆看到的某个特殊展品或其他内容的描述。上面的样本采用了后者，对博物馆中的机器人导游进行了描述。
注意，exquisite表示“精致的”；exhibit表示“展品”；catch one's eyes表示“惹眼；吸引某人注意力”；promptly表示立即；迅速”；representative表示“具有代表性的”。
3、第三段
本段主要用来描述本次博物馆之旅的感受。如下面的范文所示：
I cannot remember any of the silk exhibits now, but I will never forget the lovely robot.
【注意】
本段要基于第二段的描述来总结，来表达本次博物馆之旅的难忘之处——机器人导游。
注意，cannot不要分开写。
三、高分范文
My visit to the museum
It was a sunny Saturday morning. My parents took me to the Silk Museum.
The museum is very large, and there were many exquisite ancient silk products on display. I did not really feel like appreciating the silk exhibits, but while we were at the entrance of the museum, a 'female’ robot caught my eyes, because she was wearing nice silk clothes and could speak English! I said “Hello, how old are you?” to her and she promptly answered “Hello, I am two years old.” to me. Then I asked her a few questions about the exhibits, and she, like a professional guide, introduced some of the most representative exhibits to me, in ENGLISH! When my parents told me to walk on, I took a photo with the robot.
I cannot remember any of the silk exhibits now, but I will never forget the lovely robot.
四、举一反三
在谋篇布局上，本文也可以这样安排：
1、第一段
简单交代博物馆之行的时间和地点。如下文所示：
Last Sunday afternoon, I paid a visit to the Silk Museum near the West Lake in Hangzhou.
2、第二段
详细介绍爷爷的性格特点和兴趣爱好。如下文所示：
is one of the first state-level museums in China , covering an area of 42,286 square meters and a building area of 22,999 square meters. Among all the exquisite exhibits, what impressed me most is the Small Dragon Robe. A dragon robe is the synonym for emperor, whose attire is made strictly according to formal codes. Starting from Emperor Qianlong of Qing Dynasty, dragon robes must have the twelve symbols with the unique color bright yellow. However, the Small Dragon Robe is rare to be found elsewhere, because it is rather small in size, which was apparently tailored specially for a child emperor.
3、第三段
简单总结本次博物馆之旅的感受。如下文所示：
There are such a bewildering variety of silk exhibits on show that it was hardly possible for me to appreciate them all in one breath, so I had to leave with great reluctance hoping for another visit back soon.
联系客服
