有的同学在写读后续写时,句子写的比较短,描写少,句子空洞无味,像白开水一样,自然分数就高不起来。不妨跟着今天的学习,试着将自己的句子扩充起来,使用一些介词短语,非谓语,定语从句等手段,让句子变长,让意思更充盈丰富。
例如:My son handed me the money. 我的儿子把钱递给我。
思考:这句话可不可以加一点对my son 的描述,比如副词,或者他的表情都是可以的。
扩句参考:
1. My son handed me the money proudly.
2. My son handed me the money with a proud smile on his face.
3. My son handed me the money with a proud smile on his face, saying,"Mom, the money is yours to deal with."
怎么样?是不是感觉这样扩句后,文章的句子显得更生动了呢? 大家要在今后的写作练习中多多模仿着去练习扩句,让自己的文章更充实。当然,这里要注意一点,适当的扩充就好,而且要符合文章整体的意境,不能随便扩充跑题的内容哦。
下面是一些扩句练习,大家可以试着自己扩一下,最后面有答案哦!
1. _____________________________, Tom jumped with extraordinary joy.
2. The young girl ___________________________ seems to be very happy.
3. Indian has a national festival to honor Mohandas Gandhi, ___________________________________________________________.
4. The boys were laughing and said Tom would fail, which___________________________________________
5. ________________________, we felt our time and effort worthwhile
6. Every day we have the choice of building a bridge, because________________________________________________.
7. 被他的故事感动,我们要尽力帮助他。
___________________________,we will go our length to help him.(touch)
8. 周六,他疯狂地在花园里劳动。
On Saturday, he worked in the garden_________________.
9. 让她开心的是,这位熟悉地理位置的老人告知她去湖边的道路。
To her great joy, the old man, who geographical characteristics, informed her of the way to the lake.
10. 这个穿着肥大的裤子,戴着一顶黑色帽子的小流浪汉很受人们欢迎。
The little tramp,______________________________________, was very popular with people.(wearing)
参考答案:
1. Hearing the news, Tom jumped with extraordinary joy.
2. The young girl with long black hair seems to be very happy.
3. Indian has a national festival to honor Mohandas Gandhi, the leader who helped gain India's independence from Britain.
4. The boys were laughing and said Tom would fail, which made him frustrated.
5. Exhausted as we were, we felt our time and effort worthwhile.
6. Every day we have the choice of building a bridge, because bridges enhance our openness and friendship.
7. Touched by his story, we will go our length to help him.(touch)
8. On Saturday, he worked in the garden like crazy.
9. To her great joy, the old man, who was familiar with the geographical characteristics, informed her of the way to the lake.
10. The little tramp, wearing loose pants and a black hat ,was very popular with people.(wearing)
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