十一、征文投稿
征文投稿类文章一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写,以议论文和记叙文居多,其结构通常如下:
1.Recently we did a surveyabout whether...or not.
最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。
2.It has been...years since...wasfounded and it has been accompanying me all through my childhood.
自从……成立以来已经……年了,它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
3.In my spare time,I often read the newspaperwhich covers not only classic stories but also current affairs.
在业余时间,我经常读这份不仅包括经典故事,还报道时事的报纸。
4.By reading the newspaper,not only do I...but also I...
通过阅读报纸,我不仅……而且我……
5.I do expect...can havea promising future.
我确实希望……有一个光明的未来。
学校英文报正在开展以How to Spend Our NationalHoliday为题的讨论。请根据表格中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.调查结果描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
“如何度过国庆节”调查结果
方式
学习
娱乐
社会实践,志愿活动
人数百分比
60%
15%
25%
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.题目和开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
满分佳作
名师点评
How to Spend Our National Holiday
Our National Holiday is a special time for us students to have our own life. As the form shows,students choose different ways to spend our National Holiday.
Surprisingly,students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%.15% of students think the holiday is an occasion for them to relax themselves enjoying movies or playing computer games.To our delight,the percentage of the students taking part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
The figures in the form show students attach great importance to study.Meanwhile more and more students have interest in exercising their ability and serving others.
From my perspective,our National Holiday should be a meaningful time for us students to enjoy ourselves or learn something beyond the classrooms.Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves.
1.这是一篇图表作文。开篇引出话题。
2.文章主体部分介绍了图表所呈现的数据,并对此展开了说明。使用了一些高级词汇,如account for,occasion,relax,to our delight,attach,meanwhile等。还使用了一些高级句式表达,如...students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句);As the form shows...(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)。
3.文章结尾发表了个人的看法,使用了常用语From my perspective,除此之外,还使用了一些高级词汇,如meaningful,enjoy ourselves,beyond等。还运用了动名词作主语的高级句式:Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves.
新学期开始了,你校英文报正在举行“New Term,New Look”的征文活动,你打算以“诚信考试”为题投稿,内容包括:
1.诚信考试的重要性;
2.你的期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
TakeExams Honestly
参考范文
TakeExams Honestly
Nowadays manystudents care too much about high grades,resulting in growing inappropriatebehaviors in exams.As far as I am concerned,taking exams with integrity is necessary.
Honesty isconsidered as one of important Chinese traditional virtues.As a student,we should avoid cheatingin every exam,whichis a right way to demonstrate our integrity.In other words,the process of learningis more meaningful than getting a seemingly perfect but unreal result.
All in all,it is high time that we should value honesty.
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