写作常见错误分析
1.主语缺失
In our country feels very free.
Revised:Peaple feel free in our country.
2.非名词主语
Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.
Revised:Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life.
Or:Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
Revised :Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
3.主谓错位
Reading books can acquire knowledge.
Revised:Peaple can acquire knowledge from books.
Now peaple’s lives can’t leave TV.
Revised:Now people can’t do without TV.
4.多重谓语
In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people have been cheated. Revised :In our modern society,many examples around us show that many people have been cheated.
Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad. Revised :Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad.
5.非动词谓语
It is said that the place worth touring./ Some people against it.
6.主谓不一致
I have to visit the teacher who teach me English.
7.指代不明
He give a reason for not attending the meeting ,which nobody believed.
Revised:He gave a reason ,which nobody believed,for not attending the meeting./ He gave a reason for not attending the meeting ,a reason which nobody believed.
Sometimes the teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
Revised: Sometimes the teacthers have to inform the students of the burden students have to bear.
8.形副误用
Surprising enough,he is facing the failure very brave.
Revised: Surprisingly enough,he is facing the failure very bravely.
9.分词误用
Comparing with other countries,
Revised : Compared wiyh ……
Having carried out economic reforms in our country,peaple’s living standard has been greatly improved. Revised: Having carried out economic reforms, our government has greatly improved peaple’s living standard.
10.平行错误
Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.
Revised: Before I selected the new course ,my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / …warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.
11.破句
Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.
Revised: ……if you want to find a job, you …
17.First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you give to others is important. Revised: …..good manners, because the first …
12.搭配错误
In the past the price of meat was so expensive (high) that most families could not afford it. 19.Crowded (Heavy) traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.
13.冠词错误
In my opinion ,the future of bicycle is very promising.
Revised: ……the future of the bicycle is …
They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad books. Revised: …..choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.
动词时态的错误是高考英语书面表达中最常见的错误之一,也是考生运用语言的能力差的显著标志之一。如2002关于公园收不收门票的讨论的介绍，陈述讨论的语句通常用一般现在时：Sixty of the students of our school think it is unnecessary to charge an entrance fee. They think that……不少考生表达为Some people thought that……
在口语中，交际双方可借助手势、语气等来理解不完整的句子，可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，又想加些补充说明时发生．例如： There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .应改为：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV ,radio ,and newspaper.
这种错误一般说来是审题不清所致。如2003年的书面表达，正确内容是：I’ve found a flat for you. It’s a small one of 25 square meters with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. The house is near No 11 bus stop on Fang
例如：把He worked hard. He failed the exam.改为He worked hard. However, he failed the exam.就比较好。
如：将 to my surprise 表达为 to my surprised;将in my spare time 表达成 at my spare time; 将He didn’t lose heart though he failed.表达为He didn’t lose his heart though he failed.
例如：把My father is a worker. My father works in a big company. 改为My father is a worker. He works in a big company. 就比较好。
写作中常见考生因分不清单词的词性而产生错误。大致有：
a.将vi.用成vt.如:come the city/return the place
b.将adj.用成vt.如:Please present on time. Don’t absent!
c.将u.n.用成c.n.如:a good news/many informations
d.将adj./adv.使用错误.如:in the recently years/study hardly;
e.将prep.用成v.如:Many overpasses arounded the city. The road throughed the city.
f.将名词的单/复数使用不当。如：There are lots of high building. // Most of the people have private car. 句中building应改为buildings；句中car应改为cars。
g.句子的主谓不一致:如:A large number of beautiful buildings has been built. 句中has应改正为have。
h.常用词拼写错误:如:beautiful写成beautful; believe写成belive; money写成moneny…
i.在叙事文中通常会运用一般过去时态,所以就出现了动词的过去式,尤其是不规则动词的过去式的拼写错误很普遍的现象。如：visitted/ hurted/ writed/….
j.不定冠词的使用错误:如:send a e-mail to you(an)/ Even a overpass has been built…(an)/ He graduated from an university.(a)
k.虚词错误：①冠词的漏用和误用, 如：My father is worker. ②缺必要的连结词或连结词多余, 如：He likes swimming, I like climbing.
例如：There are many ways we get to know the outside world.应改为：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.或 There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
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