写作常见错误分析
1.主语缺失
In our country feels very free.
Revised:Peaple feel free in our country.
2.非名词主语
Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.
Revised:Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life.
Or:Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
Revised :Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
3.主谓错位
Reading books can acquire knowledge.
Revised:Peaple can acquire knowledge from books.
Now peaple’s lives can’t leave TV.
Revised:Now people can’t do without TV.
4.多重谓语
In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people have been cheated. Revised :In our modern society,many examples around us show that many people have been cheated.
Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad. Revised :Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad.
5.非动词谓语
It is said that the place worth touring./ Some people against it.
6.主谓不一致
I have to visit the teacher who teach me English.
7.指代不明
He give a reason for not attending the meeting ,which nobody believed.
Revised:He gave a reason ,which nobody believed,for not attending the meeting./ He gave a reason for not attending the meeting ,a reason which nobody believed.
Sometimes the teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
Revised: Sometimes the teacthers have to inform the students of the burden students have to bear.
8.形副误用
Surprising enough,he is facing the failure very brave.
Revised: Surprisingly enough,he is facing the failure very bravely.
9.分词误用
Comparing with other countries,
Revised : Compared wiyh ……
Having carried out economic reforms in our country,peaple’s living standard has been greatly improved. Revised: Having carried out economic reforms, our government has greatly improved peaple’s living standard.
10.平行错误
Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.
Revised: Before I selected the new course ,my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / …warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.
11.破句
Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.
Revised: ……if you want to find a job, you …
17.First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you give to others is important. Revised: …..good manners, because the first …
12.搭配错误
In the past the price of meat was so expensive (high) that most families could not afford it. 19.Crowded (Heavy) traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.
13.冠词错误
In my opinion ,the future of bicycle is very promising.
Revised: ……the future of the bicycle is …
They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad books. Revised: …..choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.
动词时态的错误是高考英语书面表达中最常见的错误之一,也是考生运用语言的能力差的显著标志之一。如2002关于公园收不收门票的讨论的介绍,陈述讨论的语句通常用一般现在时:Sixty of the students of our school think it is unnecessary to charge an entrance fee. They think that……不少考生表达为Some people thought that……
在口语中,交际双方可借助手势、语气等来理解不完整的句子,可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,又想加些补充说明时发生.例如: There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .应改为:There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV ,radio ,and newspaper.
这种错误一般说来是审题不清所致。如2003年的书面表达,正确内容是:I’ve found a flat for you. It’s a small one of 25 square meters with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. The house is near No 11 bus stop on Fang
例如:把He worked hard. He failed the exam.改为He worked hard. However, he failed the exam.就比较好。
如:将 to my surprise 表达为 to my surprised;将in my spare time 表达成 at my spare time; 将He didn’t lose heart though he failed.表达为He didn’t lose his heart though he failed.
例如:把My father is a worker. My father works in a big company. 改为My father is a worker. He works in a big company. 就比较好。
写作中常见考生因分不清单词的词性而产生错误。大致有:
a.将vi.用成vt.如:come the city/return the place
b.将adj.用成vt.如:Please present on time. Don’t absent!
c.将u.n.用成c.n.如:a good news/many informations
d.将adj./adv.使用错误.如:in the recently years/study hardly;
e.将prep.用成v.如:Many overpasses arounded the city. The road throughed the city.
f.将名词的单/复数使用不当。如:There are lots of high building. // Most of the people have private car. 句中building应改为buildings;句中car应改为cars。
g.句子的主谓不一致:如:A large number of beautiful buildings has been built. 句中has应改正为have。
h.常用词拼写错误:如:beautiful写成beautful; believe写成belive; money写成moneny…
i.在叙事文中通常会运用一般过去时态,所以就出现了动词的过去式,尤其是不规则动词的过去式的拼写错误很普遍的现象。如:visitted/ hurted/ writed/….
j.不定冠词的使用错误:如:send a e-mail to you(an)/ Even a overpass has been built…(an)/ He graduated from an university.(a)
k.虚词错误:①冠词的漏用和误用, 如:My father is worker. ②缺必要的连结词或连结词多余, 如:He likes swimming, I like climbing.
例如:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.应改为:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.或 There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
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