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2019年1月19日雅思考试大作文题目
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More and more people are reading news online, but newspapers will still be the main source of news for most people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【类型四：原因、结果、解决方案】
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「Introduction」With online news media developing at a rapid pace,← 语法：“独立主格结构”作状语 traditional print media is heavily impacted. Typically,← 逻辑连接，说明是上一句一个宏观现象中的一个具体情况 newspapers are declining and will sooner or later be gone.
「Body」Before newspapers are completely replaced, many readers who like the feel of papers and ink find it difficult familiarizing themselves with the palm-sized screen [familiarize sb. with sth.]. In addition, they are skeptical about the professionalism of online news agencies. In other words, ←逻辑连接，把上一句话没有说到最清楚的内容说清楚they may often find the reporting dubious, since news media are notorious for fabricating [fabricate] stories. [词汇：关键的得分点是表“正/负评价”的形容词和动词] For these reasons, at present, people still prefer being informed by traditional newspapers.
However, this situation is changing. ← 逻辑连接，用与逻辑连接的句子，信息笼统（没有具体内容，只说明论证方向），句子短。 First, compared with online news, no newspaper is able to give instant response to events as soon as they happen. If people read stories behind the time, at least 12 hours after an event happens, what is the point of reading “news”? Because of this critical disadvantage, newspapers will become an exhibit in the museum. Meanwhile, newspapers are a one-way conveyance of information. Journalists give what they have to the audience and do not receive anything from them. This is where online news media has an edge that people can make a comment and exchange ideas with the editors and other readers as they read. ← 语法：“同位语从句” Since modern readers need the interaction, newspapers, which are devoid of this feature, will soon be abandoned. In addition, online news present events in a variety of ways, including video clips, dozens of pictures and animation. Paper publications, by marked contrast, are too plain.
「Conclusion」At this point, I think we can safely anticipate that newspapers are being antiquated. At the same time, their replacement, online news, ← 语法：“同位语”is booming.
[词汇：关键的得分点是表“正/负评价”的形容词和动词，选用有意义细节的词]
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