【原文】 Dear Beijing Public Transport On behalf of the Norwegian Olympic and Paralympic Committee we would like to thank you for the excellent service you have provided us during the 24th Olympic Winter Games in Beijing.All our requests have been met with great standard. You are always on time and you have taken us where our delegation members need to go.You have been very kind and helpful to us and you greet us with a smile every day.Thank you for a lovely and pleasant stay and for making these Games so memorable.Kind regards【译文】尊敬的北京公交集团:我们谨代表挪威奥运会和残奥会委员会感谢你们在北京第二十四届冬奥会期间为我们提供的优质服务。我们的出行需求得到了充分满足。你们的公交车总是能非常准时地把我们的代表团成员送达目的地。你们的职工非常友好和乐于助人,每天都面带微笑欢迎我们。感谢你们周到的服务,让我们度过了一段非常美好的时光,也感谢你们让这次赛事变得如此难忘。祝好!挪威奥运会和残奥会委员会北京奥运村领队【文本解析】请结合感谢信三要素(1. 提出感谢,说明原因;2. 细节描述感谢内容,3. 再次感谢,表达祝愿)分析如下感谢信:Dear Beijing Public Transport On behalf of the Norwegian Olympic and Paralympic Committee we would like to thank you for the excellent service you have provided us during the 24th Olympic Winter Games in Beijing.All our request have been met with great standard. You are always on time and you have taken us where our delegation members need to go.You have been very kind and helpful to us and you greet us with a smile every day.Thank you for a lovely and pleasant stay and for making these Games so memorable.Kind regards 思考问题:
感谢信具有怎么样的结构形式?
这篇感谢信的主题是什么?要点有几项?
信中是如何表达感谢的?用到了哪些话题词汇?哪些短语结构?哪些句型句式?
这封感谢信语言上有什么特点?对我的启迪是什么?
针对这封信,我能够仿照高考书面表达,命制作文写作题目吗?
【举一反三】 请结合以上5个问题,尝试分析以下作文:Dear Liu Dong, I'm back at school now. I wish to express my thanks to you for the wonderful vacation I spent with you and your family. During the vacation you taught me how to swim, boat and fish. I really appreciate your taking time off work to take me around and show me so many places. Your mother is such a terrific cook! I think I must have gained 10 pounds just in the week I spent with you. Surely I've spent a happy vacation, which will be remembered for long. I hope you will be able to visit our school sometime. Thank you again. Let's keep in touch. Love, Li Ming 思考问题:1. 这篇感谢信和挪威奥委会的感谢信有什么共性? 2. 这篇感谢信和挪威奥委会的感谢信有什么差异?你认为造成这种差异的原因是什么?3. 感谢信写作中你会考虑语体的差异吗?如何考量这种差异? 4. 其他写作中是否也存在语体的差异?写作表达中要注意些什么?5. 我平时的写作中有这样的思考吗?通过这样的对比和思考,我有哪些感悟和启发? 【触类旁通】 Dear Lihua,How about your life? I'm writing to express my thanks for your warm reception during my visit to Beijing this summer holiday.During the visit, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance. First, I stayed at your home, and you cooked three delicious meals for me. And you showed me around quite a few places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. Besides, you tooke many beautiful photos of me. What's more, there is still one thing that I can't forget. You went shopping with me. I really had a wonderful time. Another thing that I should mention is that your parents were so kind to drive us. Thank you for your kindess again and give my best regards to your parents. Yours sincerely Tom 任务1. 结合感谢信三要素,思考文章的结构并复原命制书面表达试题;任务2. 假定你是李华,在收到Tom的感谢信后,给他回复邮件,要点自拟。声明 :本公众号坚持分享优质教育资源,传递教育正能量,让更多学生、老师和家长受益。图文版权归原作者所有。内容中观点代表原作者观点,并不完全代表本平台观点。如涉及版权问题,请及时联系,我们将在第一时间删除或添加版权信息。联系:QQ(278605471),微信(mutouren110)。