第二节 书面表达
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
参考范文
Possible version one:
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. Take my neighbor Uncle Li for example. He is a volunteer who works as a gate guard in our community during the epidemic of COVID-19, and his main duty is to measure body temperature and check the passes for exit and entry. Regardless of the risk of getting infected, Uncle Li is responsible and devoted to his job. Even in terrible weather, he still sticks to his post and leaves no one unchecked. Thanks to his efforts in epidemic prevention and control, our neighborhood has been in a good state. Actually, there are many selfless people like Uncle Li around us, and they well deserve our respect.(114)
Possible version two:
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. And the person I respect most is my physics teacher. She is of medium height, with long and blonde hair. She is so patient with each student that we all like her.
It is her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement. She teaches us not only gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect.(104)
Possible version three:
The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.(125)
Possible version four
The Man I Respect Most
My father is the man I respect most. Stern as he may be, he never fails to show his care and consideration. Once I broke a neighbor’s window. Seeing nobody around, I ran away immediately. When Dad came home, he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what had happened.
I could only tell him the truth. Rather than scold me, he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize to our neighbor. I learned from this episode that not only does Dad take care of our health but he also teaches us how to be good citizens. How lucky I am to have such a good father!
Possible version five
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around me. My maths teacher, Mr. Wang, who has a pair of big shiny eyes, straight nose, and small mouth, is the person I respect most in my life.
During my senior school days, I did not often get good marks for maths, but Mr. Wang never scolded me. Instead, he always asked me to raise questions whenever I need help. In particular, he was very patient though sometimes I had no way to solve some difficult maths problems. He always said to me, 'So long as you keep working hard, you are certain to get success in the future.
And with his considerate help, I successfully got high marks for the national college entrance examination.
Possible version six
The person I respect
For me, the most respectable person round me is my best friend, Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in my class, who is crazy about reading, learning and helping other people.There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him. First and foremost, needless to say, he is good at English, for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student. Additionally, no one can deny he gets along well with all our classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience, considering that he has been serving as vice monitor for many years.Hopefully, I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.
Possible version seven
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around me. One of them is my English teacher.
The door opened, and in came the English teacher Ms. Cai, who is not tall but pretty①. She said we had made remarkable progress in the last exam, with a certain boy being the top②.
I again couldn't help bursting into tears of joy③. Three months before, on a similar occasion④, Ms. Cai seriously declared that the results of the final exam were disappointing, with a certain boy being at the bottom. Suddenly I found all the eyes were fixed upon me⑤ . Class over, Ms. Cai advised me to catch up with the others by having extra lessons⑥.
I made it, so I am sincerely grateful to my English teacher.(113words)
教师点评:
①in came the English teacher Ms. Cai是典型的全部倒装句。介词in放于句首,谓语动词came放在其后,外貌特征的简单描述精准到位。足见习作者倒装句式的运用娴熟干练。
②remarkable progress即可理解为“优异成绩,显著进步”,而with a certain boy being the top则被视为“with复合结构”,即“with+宾语+宾补”结构,用于此处生动、准确。
③couldn't help bursting into tears of joy意为“忍不住流下高兴的眼泪”。can't/couldn't help doing 即“忍不住做....,burst into tears...即“突然哭起来....”。.词汇运用娴熟准确。
|④on a similar occasion即为“类似的场面、相似的场景”。
⑤be fixed upon sb.即含“盯着某人、聚焦在某人身上”之意。
|⑥Class over是“名词+副词”构成的独立主格结构,catch up with意为“赶上”,刻画得准确到位。
⑦呼应了主题,提升了文章的立意。
Possible version eight
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. I have great admiration for Mr. Sun, my English teacher, a middle-aged man of few words.
First, his helpfulness and kindness win him great popularity and a good reputation among us. Whatever difficulties we come across, he doesn’t hesitate to come to our aid. In some sense, he is virtually a beacon of hope, encouraging us never to give up. On top of that, it is his rich experience and devotion to teaching that not only give us easy access to professional knowledge but most importantly shape our character.
Such is Mr. Sun that I have the highest respect for him. (103 words)
Possible version nine
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. My mum, an ordinary middle-aged woman, is one of the people who I love and respect most. Born into a poor family, she has always been independent and cherished what she has had. Now she is a teacher, works well into midnight, but seldom, if ever, complains.
The reason why I show respect for her is that she never loses temper but instead always encourages me. My thoughts flashed back to the days when I felt cast down on account of my poor academic performance. Aware of my low spirits, she told me firmly that as long as I tried my best, she would take pride in me whatever the result would be. In the meanwhile, she secretly stuck some famous sayings such as 'where there is a will, there is a way' on my table, reminding me to keep a positive attitude toward life. With her constant encouragement and unconditional trust, I regained my confidence and continued to pursue my dream. Were it not for her, I couldn't be what I am now.
Such is my beloved mum, a simple yet great woman, like a beam of sunshine, shining me the road ahead.
Possible version ten
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. The one I respect most is my aunt, a middle-aged nurse, always wearing a smile and a determined look, who fought against the COVID-19 during the tough times of the epidemic.
Her selfless devotion to her job never fails to appeal to me. With a good knowledge of medical care, she strengthens her resolve to be an excellent nurse and cares enough for her patients. Additionally, it is her passionate belief in what she is doing that leaves a deep impression on me. Faced with the outbreak of the epidemic, she went to Wuhan without a second thought, where she helped to save hundreds of lives. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her heroic deeds will flash through my mind and motivate me to overcome them.
Admittedly, words cannot express my admiration and respect for her. What she has done sheds light on the future lying before me.
Possible version eleven
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating virus.
Zhong Nanshan, a medical scientist, is a leading figure in the battles against SARS in 2003 and COVID in 2019, winning him the worldwide respect. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. What impresses me most is that aged 84, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation at the beginning of the outbreak of COVID-19 epidemic. Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID-19. With their great efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID-19 was finally under control.
His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a man like him in the future.
Possible version twelve
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. The one I respect most is Mr. Huang, my head teacher and English teacher in Senior Three. His teaching has made a great difference to my study as well as my life.
As a head teacher, Mr. Huang is really careful and considerate. He regards us as his own children. While he is so strict with us in our study, he does care about our lives. What moves us most is that he cooks eggs for us every morning and brings us something delicious to eat sometimes. Mr. Huang is born a good English teacher because he can always make his classes so interesting and attractive that we all enjoy having English classes and have made great progress in English. We have found it easy to learn English well since we became his students. We learn a lot from him, not only the way to learn English but also how to be a good person.
Mr. Huang is respected by all the students. It's he that fulfills our senior school life. We feel it lucky to have such an excellent teacher and thank him for what he has done for us from the bottom of our hearts. (197 words)
Possible version thirteen
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. Zhong Nanshan, a famous elderly medical expert , is the one who I admire most.
First of all, we should express great respect for Zhong Nanshan, because China wouldn’t have made such achievements in the battle against the COVID-19 outbreaks without him. He was born in Jiangsu, grew up in Guangdong and graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960. Ordinary-looking as he is, he is extraordinary in his work. In the spring of 2003, not only did Dr. Zhong lead the team, but also took an active part in and finally won the battle against SARS. Therefore, he was honored as one of the ten of China’s inspirational role models in 2004. He is regarded as one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century.
He sets a good example to us teenagers and he is really an excellent scientist who deserves my admiration and respect.
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