我的翻译故事---《雨天放学即景》

雨天放学即景

王恒鼎

撑开彩伞雨沙沙，一个人成一朵花。

涌出校门花似海，遍分春色到千家。

诗人简介  

 王恒鼎（1966-  ），别名固吟楼主、知艳斋、只雁斋等，福建福鼎人。中学教师。有《固吟楼诗词》《知艳斋情诗》等。

Biosketch of the Poet:

WANG Hengding (1966—), a native of Fuding, Fujian Province, is a middle school teacher. He is also known as Always Singing Host, Knowing Beauty Room and Lonely Goose Room. He published many poems, including Collections of Always Singing Host, Love Poems of Knowing Beauty Room, and so on. (雷秋慧译)

小练笔  

Composed on a Rainy Day When School is Over

By WANG Hengding

Tr. LEI Qiuhui

Open umbrellas, rain rustling around,

One person, one color, blooming like flowers.

Once they rush out, sea of flowers is unfold ,

To every family, spring spreads forward.

诗歌鉴赏  

王恒鼎诗词注重传统继承，对诗词格律驾轻就熟，如鱼得水。同时又能与现代人的生活和思想感情结合起来，对继承与创新二者关系的处理恰到好处，在立意、选材、角度、形象、语言上都能彰显其艺术个性和审美修养。所写诗词迭出新意，轻松自然，别具巧思。知艳斋情诗用语真纯，感人至深，其性灵格调两者兼宜，华实并茂，无夸缛斗炫之态。 

本首诗描写了春天雨中放学时学校门口的情景：放学后，孩子们撑开五颜六色的雨伞，冲进雨中，顿时细雨沙沙、“花”开遍地，满目春色随即到访千家万户。诗人借物抒情，由静及动，将春雨的美好，孩童的天真，沙沙的细雨，全部融在了一把把小小的雨伞上。美景如画，生活如诗，岁月静好，美哉乐哉。