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2016年高考(广东卷)英语改错题命题规律及解题技巧4

练习(1-15)

                                      练习(1)

My parents live in thecountry. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day myparent went to work in the fields taking my little sisterwith Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked to theriver nearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She was trying topick a flower while she fell into the river. AhFu barked and jumped to the water immediate. When my parents heardAh Fu barking they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimmingtowards the bank carried my little sister. Myparents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved mylittle sister.

 (2)

May I have yourattention, please? I have an announcementmake.

The Student Union isgoing to hold a party in Saturday evening,August 15, to welcome my friends from the UnitedStates. The party will be hold in the roof gardenof the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There willhave music, dancing, singing, games andexchange of gift. Everybody may bringa small gift on this purpose. Remember towrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of goodwish.

Don’t forget: 7:30,Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There is sure to be alot of fun. Everybody is welcomed.

(3)

We're soglad you're coming to join us on Sunday. Hereis what you can find us. We'll have ourpicnics in the People's Park. Youknow where that is, isn't you? After youentered the park by the main gate, walkstraightly on till you come to a stream.Cross the stream and turning right. Afterwalking in a while you'll come to ahill. Walk around to  other side of the hill.There you'll see a lake. We'll have our picnic here in the smallwood by the lake. I'm sure you'll have no trouble finding us. Docome!

 

 (4)

A fewdays beforemy brother and I went to thecinema by bicycle. Mybrother was riding with meseatingon the seat behind. As we came to thecrossroad, a young man and a girl came upand stopped us. ‘We've found you long last(终于),’ theysaid. Andwe don't know them.Point to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ‘Hestopped us about half hour ago and made us tocatch the next offender. So come on, stand here.Hoping you don't have to wait as long as we did . Goodluck.’

(5)

Dear MrSmith,

I was so please to hearfrom you and I'm writing to tell you something aboutmyschool. You are right, quite few changes havebeen taken place. On the one side of the road,there has a new classroombuilding. On the other sidewhicha playground used to be now stand another newbuilding, our library. In it there are all kind ofbooks, newspapers or magazines.Theplayground is now in front of school. We've also plant a lotof trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see foryourself some days.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

(6)

 Myname is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning provinceon February 1977. I started school in 1984while I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian andgraduate this summer. The main subjects Istudied at school including Chinese, maths,English, physics, chemical and computer. I like English andcomputer best but I am very good at them. Lastyear I had won first prize in the schoolcomputer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popularmusic and collect stamps. My favourite sport are swimming in summerand skating in winter.

 (7)

How nice to hear fromyou again! You want to know what is going on in schools in china.In short, things have begun to improve since we called on school toreduce learning load. I don’t know about the others, but I used tohave to do works even on weekends by doing endless homework andattending classes as well. Now, I have more free time. I can followmy own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, andtaking computer lessons. In the evenings, I can watch news on TV orread newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as Iknow, everyone is happy about the new arrangement of things.

 (8)

Dear Bill,

I was very glad receiveyour letter on July 13th. Thank you for your congragulation. I wasvery excited when I heard that Beijing won the bid for the 2008Olympic Games. Immediate, I called Weiguo and Lihong to my house .After the brief discussion, we decidedto put up a wall’s newspaper for ourclass. When we hurried to our classroom andbegan to work. Weiguo wrote a poem, Lihong copied some newson   thenewspapers. I draw the Olympic flag. Thenext Monday, Our classmates were both surprised andoverjoying when they saw the wallnewspaper. I hoped you can come to Chinato watch the Olympic Games in 2008, then I'll be very happy to beyour guide.

Sincerely yours

 

 (9)

Dear Bob, 

I’m so glad to learnthat you are come in September. I found aplace for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square metre, with abedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. In thebedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and thechair. The rent is 500 yuans per month. The flat isin a building on Fangcao Street, it is not far from JianxinChinese School. Bus No. 11 can take you straightlytothe school. In fact, it’s only one stop way. Do you think you’dlike it? If so , I can try and find anotherplace for you. Just let me know.

 (10)

It is well-known thatwe exist in the dynamic(有生气的) world with variousdifficulties. When we are faced them, nothing is more importantthan hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can findsometime the question is not as “huge”so weimagine.

Take most ofour for example, the entrance exam to college seem tobe a horrible monster. According, some people give up, somepersist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of thedifficulties, as good as fullpreparation, try and exert your strength, but then we willovercome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe weyoungster should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothingis impossible, brave it out and just do it!

 (11)

Almost all of us heardthe story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we are little kids.What we can learn from the story is we must be honest.Therefore, there’re lots ofphenomenon of dishonestynowadays.

Being honest does greatharm not only to other people andalso to yourself. Takethe case of fake milk powder for anexample. After drinkingthis kind of milk, the bab had big heads while their legs and armswere still thin, whatbadly affected theirhealth. To my great relief, the producersgot accused and punished after all the seriousconsequences in the end.

(12)

It is known tous, a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in manycountries. An increasing number of cases are reported everyday.

It’s thought that H1N1flu spread in the same way that regularseasonal influenza viruses do, that is, spreading fromperson-to-person, mainly through the coughs and sneezes of peoplewho are sick with virus.

Faced with this severedisease, here are some everyday measure we should take to stayhealthy. First, cover your nose and mouth by a tissue whenyou cough or sneeze. Wash your hands often with soap and water,especial after you cough or sneeze. Avoid touch your eyes, nose ormouth. Germs spread that way. If you get sick, stay home fromwork and school and limit contact with others to keep frominfecting them.

Finally, H1N1 flu isnot a terribly deadly disease, which is curable. So, don’t benervous and just keep calm as usually.

(13)

During the weekend Itravelled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel bytrain and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a shortjourney. In the beginning I didn't feel very happily, but thisfeeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I wassoon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains,fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short andcomfortably journey very much. This experience has shown thattravelling in air is actually the safest way of makejourneys

(14)

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell yousomething more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachersattended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the100-meters race. He finished the race in12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet wasreally success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proudof that we haddone.

Looking forward toreceive yourletter.

Yours, LiPing

 

(15)

Dear MrRyan,

Recent I have learned from the newspaper that yourcompany need a secretary. I'd like to get the position. I'm a girlof 25 ad I'm 1.65m-height.I graduated the English department ofWuHan University but I have worked^ anEnglish teacher for 3 years at the university after graduation. I'mgood at computers as well as English. I'm special interested inwriting and I've written more than twenty news reports in articlesfor some newspapers and magazine. I want to be a secretary, so Istill practise and improve my writing. I will appreciate if I amaccepted and I will work hard to do my work good for the company.My telephone number is 027-87560250

 

 

 

 

最新2016年高考英语短文改错专题训练参考答案

[1)答案]

My parents live in the country. They keep a dogcalling Ah Fu. One daymy

                                          called

parentwent to work in the fieldstaking my little sisterwithAh Fu and along.While

parents                                     and

they ^ working, mysister walked to the rivernearby. Ah Fu followed her there. She

   were                      a

was trying to pick a flower while she fell into river. Ah Fu barked and jumpedto the

                     when                                  into

water immediate. When my parents heard Ah Fubarking, they ran to the river. They

    immediately

saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. My parentspraised

                              carrying

Ah Fu warm. It was ourbrave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

warmly

【解析】

1.  此处是过去分词作短语作定语,因此,将calling 改为called

2.  根据上下文可知,parent应是复数,所以将parent改为parents

3.  此处my littlesisterAh Fu and along并列关系,所以将with改为and

4.  根据句意,此处应是过去进行时,所以将theywere

5.  此处的river首次出现泛指,所以将the改为a

6.  此句意思是“在他摘花时,意外掉入河中”应用be doing sth when句型,所以将while改为when

7.  根据句意,此处“跳入河中”, 所以将to改为into

8.  此处应是状语,应是副词,所以将immediate改为immediately

9.  此处是现在分词作宾补,所以将carried改为carrying

10.           此处的warmpraised的状语,所以将warm改为warmly

 

 

 

[2)答案]

May I have your attention, please? I have anannouncement ^make.

                                                to

The Student Union is going to hold a partyin Saturday evening, August 15, to

                                      on

welcome my friends fromthe United States. The party will be hold in the roof garden

       our                                      held

of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m.There will have music, dancing, singing, be

games and exchangeof gift.Everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose.

       exchanging gifts                          for

Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a fewwords of good wish.

                                                          wishes

Don’t forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden,Main Building. There is sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody iswelcomed.

                         welcome

【解析】

1、    该句子用的是have sth todo而不是have sb do,在make前加to 。

2、    指某一天的上下午时用介词on而不用in。

3、    此处的fiends应是讲话一方的朋友,是复数概念,my改为our

4、    根据句意,此处是将来被动,应将hold改为held。

5、    表示从在的有用therebe不是there have,应将have改为be。

6、    此处的exchange与dancing,singing,是并列关系,应将exchange改为exchanging。

7、    此处的gift是大家交换,是复数,应将gift改为gifts。

8、    根据句意,此处是为了这一目的,应是for this purpose; 而on purpose“故意”。

9、    此处的wish应是复数概念,所以将wish改为wishes。

10、Welcome一次即可作动词,又可作形容词,所以,应将welcomed改为welcome。

[3)答案]

We're so glad you'recoming to join us on Sunday. Here is what you can find us.

                                                  how

We'll have our picnicsin the People's Park. You know where that is,isn't you?After

           picnic                                     don’t

you entered the park by the main gate, walk straightly on till you come to a stream.enter                           straight

Cross the stream and turning right. After walking in a while you'll come to a hill. Walk

                 turn                 for

around to ^other side of the hill. There you'll see alake. We'll have our picnic here in the                                                    there

  the smallwood by the lake. I'm sureyou'll have no trouble finding us. Do come!

 woods                    

【解析】

1、此处的从属连词在从句中作方式,故将what改为how。

2、此处是单数概念,应是picnic。

3、此处的反意疑问句应与主句的人称、数等保持一致,而不是与从句保持一致,所以将isn’t改为don’t。

4、根据上下文设计概念可知此处一般现在时,所以将entered改为enter。

5、straight形容词和副词同形,此处应是straight。

6、turn和cross是并列谓语,将turning改为turn。

7、for awhile是“一会儿”而 in awhile则是“过一会儿”根据句意,此处应是for a while.

8、此处的other应是特指,前面应有the.

9、此处是指那里,应用there。

10、wood在此处是“小树林”应用woods。

[4)答案]

A fewdaysbefore my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. Mybrother

         ago

was riding with me seating on the seat behind. As we came to thecrossroad, a young

               seated/sitting                        crossroads

man and a girl came up and stopped us. ‘We've found you^ long last,’they said.And

                                              at                But

we don't know them. Point to a policeman not far away, the youngman explained,

  didn’t         Pointing

‘He stopped us about half^ hour ago and made usto catch thenext offender. So

                   an                 去掉to

come on, stand here. Hoping you don't have to wait as long as we did . Goodluck.’

             Hope                       

【解析】

1、根据句子时态和句意此处应是“几天前”,所以将before改为ago.

2、此次是现在分词作宾补,表示主动,所以将seating改为seated或sitting。

3、crossroad表示“十字路口’” 时常用Crossroads。

4、根据文意,“最终找到”at long last是固定搭配。一次在long前加at。

5、前后两句语义转折,所以将and改为but。

6、根据上下文此处是一般过去时,所以将don’t改为didn’t。

7、根据句子结构,此处的Point应是分词作伴随状语,所以将point改为pointing。

8、此处half an hour是固定搭配,所以在half后加an。

9、此处是make sb do sth结构,所以去掉catch前的to。

10、此句是祈使句,应将hoping改为hope。

[5)答案]

Dear Mr Smith,

I was so please to hear from you and I'm writingto tell you something about my

     Pleased                                         

school. You areright, quite few changeshave been takenplace. On the one side of

                                   去掉been

the road, therehas a newclassroom building. Onthe other side which aplayground

            is                                     where

used to be now standanother new building,our library. In it there are all kinds of

            stands                                        kinds

books, newspapers or magazines. Theplayground is now in front of^ school. We've

               and                                  the

also plant a lot oftrees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for

planted

yourself some days.

           day

Best wishes!                                                       Yours,

【解析】1.此处please是动词应该用形容词pleased.

 2.词句中的take place不用被动语态,所以去掉been。

3.表示存在的有用therebe 所以将has改为is。

4.whicha playground used tobe定语从句,关系词在从句表示“处所、地点”应用where。

5.此句是倒装句,其主语是another new building,所以将stand改为stands。

6.all kinds of是固定搭配,所以kind 应是复数。

7.newspapers 和magazines是比并列而不是选择关系,所以该or为and。

8.介词in frontof后的school指具体的学校,前应加the。

9.此处现在完成时,应将plant改为过去分词。

10.根据句意可知应是“某一天”,而不是“几天”,所以将days改为day。

[(6)答案]

 My name is Li Hua. I was born inDalian, Liaoning province on February 1977.

                                               in

I started school in 1984 while Iwas seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School ^

                  when                                        from

1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.6 Middle School ofDalian and graduatethis

                                                      graduated

summer. The main subjects I studied at schoolincludingChinese, maths, English,

                                     included

physics, chemical andcomputer. I like Englishand computer best butI am very good

      chemistry                                     and

at them. Last year I had won first prize in the school computercompetition. In my

              去掉had

spare time I enjoy listening to popular music andcollect stamps. My favouritesport

                                       collecting              sports

are swimming in summer and skating inwinter.

【解析】1、在英语中表示某年某月用介词,而不用on。

2、此句意思是:我七岁时开始上学,所以应用when而不是while。

3、根据句意,此处应是从某时到某时,英文常用from…to…,所以在1984前加from。

4、根据句意和上下文,该句应该是过去时态,所以将graduate改为graduated。

5、该句中的include是谓语动词,应该用included.

6、该居中的学科名称是并列关系,应将chemical改为chemistry名词。

7、根据连词前后句意义,应该是顺承关系,而不是转折关系,所以将but改为 and。

8、句中有last year时间状语,应是一般过去时,所以去掉had。

9、此句中的collect和listening是并列成分,作enjoy宾语,因此,将collect改为collecting。、10、从动词are可知sport应是复数。

[7)答案]

How nice to hear ^ you again! You want to knowwhich isgoing on in schools in

             from                     what

China. Ina short,things have begun to improve since we callon school to reduce

      去掉a                                called

learning load. I don’t know about the others,and I usedto have to do works even on

                                    but

weekends by doing endless homework and attend classes as well. Now, I havemuch

                                  attending                    more

free time. I can follow my own interests, such as readingbooks, visiting museums, or

                                                                 and

taking computer lessons. In the evening, I can watch news on TV or readnewspapers.

                         evenings

What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy aboutthe                      early

new arrangement of things.

【解析】1、此处是收到来信,应是hear from。

2、此句是宾语从句,根据句意应将which改为what。

3、inshort是固定搭配,所以去掉冠词a。

4、根据上下文可知此处应是一般过去时,所以将call改为called。

5、根据上下文可知前后两句应该是转折关系,所以将and改为but。

  6、从结构看attend和doing应是并列关系,所以将attend改为attending。

  7、此处根据上下文,应该用比较级,所以将much改为more。

8、reading books,visiting museums, or takingcomputer lessons.这几个短语是并列关系而不是选择关系,所以将or改为and。

9、根据句意,此短语意思是“每天晚上”所以将evening改为evenings。

10、根据上下文,此句中没有比较之义,所以将earlier改为early。

[8)答案]

Dear Bill,

I was very glad ^receive your letter on July 13th. Thank you foryour

           to

congragulation. I was very excited when I heard thatBeijing won the bid for the 2008

congragulations

Olympic Games. Immediate, I called Weiguo and Lihong tomy house. After the brief

             Immediately                                     a

discussion, we decided to put up a wall’s newspaper for our class. Whenwe hurried                            wall                      when去掉

to our classroom and began to work. Weiguo wrote a poem,Lihong copied some news on the newspapers. I draw the Olympic flag. The next Monday, Ourclassmates

from            drew

were both surprised and overjoying when they saw the wall newspaper. I hoped you

                   overjoyed                              hope

can come to China to watch the Olympic Games in2008, then I'll be very happy to be your guide.

Sincerely yours

【解析】1、此处用句型be glad to do sth,因此在glad后加to。

2、congratulation表示祝贺常用复数形式,所以改为congragulations

3、次出应是副词做状语,因此永Immediately。

4、此处discussion是抽象名词具体化前应该是不定冠词a。

5、该处是表示性质、用途等名词作定义不用所有格。

6、该句是单句而非复合句,所以去掉when。

7、根据Lihong copied some news on thenewspapers句意可知应该将on改为from。

8、根据上下文,该句时态应是一般过去时,所以将draw改为过去式。

9、overjoying 和surprised 是并列作表语,应该是过去分词》。

10、此处是说话人的希望,应是现在时态,所以将hoped改为hape

[9)答案]

Dear Bob, 

I’m so glad to learn that you are come inSeptember. I ^found a place for you. It’s

                            coming             have

a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroomor akitchen. In the

                      matres                          and

bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk andthe chair.The rent is 500 yuans per month.

                                                           yuan

The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,it is notfar from Jianxin Chinese School.

                                       which

Bus No. 11 can take youstraightly to the school. In fact, it’s only one stopway. Do you                    straight                                       away

think you’d like it? If so I can try and find another place for you. Just letme know.

              not

【解析】

1、此句是进行时表将来,所以将come改为coming。

2、此句意思是“我已为你找到一个住处”应该是现在完成时,在learn前加have。

3、多少平方米的英文表达应是“xx square metres。

4、此处应是并列,不是选择,所以将or改为and。

5、此次故事观此错误,应该用a,和a bed, asofa, a desk的用法一样。

6、yuan一词是中文译音,不用复数。

7、it is not farfrom Jianxin Chinese School是非限制性定语从句,所以改it为which 。

8、straight该词形容词副词同形,去掉straight的ly。

9、It is…away. 意思是“距……多远”,所以将way改为away。

10、根据上下文句意,该处应该是if not而不是if so。

[10)答案]

It is well-known that we exist inthe dynamic(有生气的)world with variousdifficulties.                        a

we are faced ^ them, nothing is more important than hope andself-confidence. With

         with

confidence, we can find sometime the question is not as“hugeso we imagine.

              sometimes                       as

Take most of our forexample, the entrance exam to college seem to be a horrible

           us                                 seems

monster. According,some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, withconfidence,

      Accordingly

right assessment of the difficulties, asgood as fullpreparation, try and exert your

                              well

strength, but then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On thewhole, I

       and

believe we youngstershould face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is

        youngsters

impossible, brave it out and just doit!

【解析】

1、此句中的world并非具体的世界,而是人们现实生活的一种环境,因此,用冠词a。

2、facedwith “面对”是固定搭配。

3、根据句意,此处应是“有时候、时而”而不是“某时”,应该用sometimes。

4、此句用not as(so)…as句型,所以改so为as。

5、此处应该是mostof us。

6、从主语entranceexam可知,谓语动词是单数 。

7、根据句子结构,此处应是According副词作状语,而不是形容词。

8、根据句意,此处应该是“除……外,还有……”,而不是 “和…….养好”,应该是as wellas。

9、根据上下文,前后两句应该是顺承关系不是转折关系,所以改but为and。

10、youngstr是we的同位语。

[11)答案]

Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes theWolf” when we are little kids.

                                                   were

What we can learn from the story is ^we must be honest.Therefore, there’re lots of

                            that              However

phenomenon of dishonesty nowadays.

phenomena

Being honestdoes great harm not only to other people andalso to yourself.

    dishonest                               but

Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drinking this kind of milk,

                     去掉an

the babyhad big heads while their legs and arms were stillthin, whatbadly affected

  babies                                           which

their health. To my great relief, the producers got accused andpunished afterall the

            our

serious consequences in the end.

【解析】

   1、根据主句动词heard的时态可知,将are改为were。

   2、^ we must behonest是表语从句,其连词that不能省。

  3、根据上下文可知,前后两句语义转折非因果,因而改Therefore为However。

   4、phenomenon是可数名词,在lots of后应是复数形式。

  5、根据句意可知,此处应是dishonest才合乎文意。

  6、not only…butalso 是固定搭配。

   7、take…for example是固定搭配,不用冠词。

  8、此处根据the baby had bigheads的heads可知一部分是babies。

   9、 what badlyaffectedtheirhealth是非限制性定语从句,因此,改what为which。

   10、To one’s greatrelief“某人大为欣喜的是”根据上下文可知应是作者一方是复数,因此改my为our。

[12)答案]

It is known to us,a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in many

As

countries. An increasing number of cases are^reportedevery day.

                                   being

It’s thought that H1N1 flu spread in the same way that regular seasonalinfluenza                     spreads

viruses do, that is, spreading from person-to-person,mainly through the coughs and sneezes of people who are sickat the virus.

                   with

Faced with this severe disease, here are someeveryday measure we shouldtake

                                            measures

to stay healthy. First, cover your nose andmouth by a tissuewhen you cough or                                with

sneeze. Wash your hands often with soap and water,especial after you coughor

                                          especially

sneeze. Avoid touchyour eyes, nose or mouth. Germs spread that way. If you get

         touching

sick, stay home from work andschool and limit contact withothers to keep from          or

infecting them.

Finally, H1N1 flu is not a terribly deadlydisease, which is curable. So, don’t be nervous and just keep calmas usually.

                        Usual

【解析】

1、It isknown to us,是置于句首的非限制性定语从句,因此,改It为As。

2、根据句意,该句是现在进行时的被动语态,应在are后加being。

3、该动词在此处应该是单数第三人称,因此改spread为spreads。

4、besick with “感染疾病”是固定搭配,所以改at为with。

5、从hereare some…可知,measure应是复数。

6、cover…with….用……盖住……..是固定搭配。

7、此处是副词做状语,应该是especially。

8、avoid后劫匪谓语动词智接动名词.

9、此处应该是并列而不是选择,因此用and。

10、asusual是固定搭配,不能用副词。

 

[13)答案]

   During the weekend I travelled by air^the firsttime in my life. I generally travel by

                                for

train and bus. It isboth cheaper and safe. But this wasa short journey. In the

   or                       safer

beginning I didn't feel very happily, but this feeling did not lastlonger. The journey               happy                         long

was very exciting. I was soon high up in the skyamong the cloud. The views of                                      clouds

mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortably

                          interesting                   comfortable

journey very much. This experience has shown thattravelling in air is actuallythe     through                  

safest way of makejourneys.

making

【解析】

   1、根据句意,应该是固定搭配for thefirst time.

  2、此处表示选择,应该是or非and。

  3、此句中应该是cheaper andsafer。

  4、此句中的feel是系动词,所应该是happy。

  5、此句中没有比较之意,所以用long而不是longer。

  6、此句中的cloud指一片一片的云,应是复数形式。

  7、此句是某物令人如何,应该是interesting。

  8、此处是定语修饰journey,所以应该用形容词。

  9、此处是指“穿过大气层”之意,所以用through。

  10、短语中的make是介词of的宾语,应该用making。

             

[14)答案]

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It washolding

                     去掉more                           held

on Oct. 6th, it was afine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachersattended it.      which                                               attending

Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in

                                  100-meter

12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meetwas really^ success. That

                                                        a

was because we were all trying to do mybest.      Although I was not one of the winner,

                             our                             winners

I was proud of that we had done.

          what

Looking forward to receive your letter.

              receiving

Yours,  Li Ping

【解析】

1、此句中没有“更多”之意,应去掉more。

2、根据句意应该是被动语态非进行时,所以改holding为held。

3、it was a fineday是非限制性定语从句,改it为which。

4、此处是分词短语作定语,和students and teachers是主动意义,应该是attending。

5、100-meter是和成形容词,其中的名词不能用复数。

6、此句中的success是抽象名词具体化的运用,意思是“一次成功;一件成功的事”,所以success前应该加a。

7、从主语we可知try one’sbest中的one’s应该是our。

8、从Iwas not one of the winner可知,我是赢者之一,所以应该是winners。

9、that we haddone是介词of的宾语,从句中缺宾语,所以改that为what。

10、Looking forward to的to是介词,所以改receive为receiving。

 

[15)答案]

Recent I have learned from the newspaper that yourcompany need a secretary.

Recently                                          needs

I'd like to get the position. I'm a girl of 25 and I'm1.65m-height.I graduated^ the

                                                           from

English department of WuHan University but I have worked^an English teacher for3

                                and          as

years at the university after graduation. I'm good at computers aswell as English. I'm

                 since

special interested in writing and I've writtenmore than twenty news reports in

specially

articles for some newspapers and magazine. I want to be a secretary, so Istill practise

                          magazines

and improve my writing. I will appreciate it. If I amaccepted and I will work hardto

                                                去掉and

do my work goodfor the company. My telephone number is027-87560250

       well

【解析】

1、Recent在句中是状语,应该是副词。

2、从主语company可知,need应该动词的单数第三人称。

3、根据句意“毕业于……” 英文中应该用graduate from。

4、前后两句是顺承关系而不是转折关系,连词应该是and。

5、根据句意“我当一名英语老师”可知应该是worked as。

6、从I have worked asan English teacher for 3 years可知,应该是since graduation而不是after graduation。

7、从specialinterested可知,应该是specially副词修饰interested。

8、从or some newspapers andmagazine可知,magazine应该是复数。

9、If I am accepted是条件从句,其后的主句前不该有and。

10、此处应该是well作状语修饰do。

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